Light of Day

I somehow always forget Darryl…but your story inspired me to a bit…I am curious if I manage that tricky bit in mine.

I understand the symbolizm too, but I also was like “What if he comes back?” I always find it a little creepy when son and father are called the same. It also feels like putting a heavy legacy on the poor boy to me. It can’t be easy to be related to Zoot or Bray in that world.

First time I read a fanfiction after Bray was gone and there stood “Amber carried Bray to bed and covered him tightly in his blanket” …I laughed myself away for I actually couldn’t erase the picture in my head. I saw Beth carrying Dwayne …lol

The nightmare was very effective. I use nightmares the same way. Instead of always letting people only retell what they have been through (it is more gripping, isn’t it? Lets one suffer way more with them!)

I enjoy reading. It is nice to have something to read and see how others spin the story on. (Going to post now in mine)

Ooh great, I’ll try and read the new chapter tonight. If I’ve inspired you to include Darryl in the future then I’m honoured!

Haha, that’s definitely an interesting mental image of Bray and Amber.

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Chapter 19: Pieces of the Puzzle

The steady patter of heavy rain on the roof of the building signalled a stormy day ahead, but as the early morning light crept gradually into the dark places of the mall, the last of the city dwellers braved the weather and finally made their way home. Amber, who had been roped into meeting and greeting again, tiredly climbed the stairs to the café, where most of the other Mallrats were gathered. The scraping of the chair as she pulled it out from under the table jolted Ellie, who had been nodding off, back into the land of the living. As she sat down and began to rub her tired feet, Jay, Trudy and Ruby joined the gathering.

‘Is that everyone?’ she asked.

‘Darryl’s looking after the babies and Gel said she needed her beauty sleep.’ Jay answered, taking a seat next to her.

‘What about the kids?’

‘Probably up to mischief somewhere,’ he said. ‘This is as full a house as you’re going to get.’

‘Right,’ Lex said grumpily. ‘So can we get on with the meeting before we all end up like Sleeping Beauty here?’ He nodded towards Ellie, who had dozed off again.

Trudy scowled at him. ‘Not much chance of that happening to you, Lex.’ she said.

‘Leave her alone, Lex!’ Salene added. ‘She’s had barely any sleep since we got back to the mall; she’s been at Jack’s bedside every night.’ She went to sit next to Ellie, putting her arm around the other girl to gently wake her up.

‘I’ll make this quick,’ Amber said, glaring at Lex. ‘I’m sure we all want to get a little rest after last night. There are a couple of things I’d like to raise with all of you.’ When she was satisfied that she had everyone’s attention she continued. ‘Now that people are starting to come back to the city we need to make sure that the tribes don’t start fighting for power again, especially with the Technos pretty much out of the picture.’ She wasn’t entirely sure how Spinner and the rest of her group fitted into everything. She made a mental note to ask Jay what he thought later. ‘I’m not saying we need to come to a decision on anything now,’ she went on. ‘We need to talk to the tribe leaders for a start, but it’s something to think about.’ Both Lex and Ebony nodded at that, and she hoped that it meant they were on her side. ‘Another thing,’ she said. ‘Is what are we going to do with all that?’ She gestured to the piles of gifts in the courtyard below. ‘We can’t exactly keep all this stuff.’

‘Why not?!’ Lex spluttered. ‘It’s not as if we took it. They gave it to us of their own free will.’

‘Remember what happened after we found the antidote,’ Salene warned. ‘People thought we were abusing our power in the end. They lost trust in us.’

‘That was completely different!’ Lex cried, once again causing Ellie to jolt out of her half-sleep.

‘We should be careful though,’ Trudy said, agreeing with Salene. ‘Especially if we’re going to hold talks with the tribe leaders. We have to make sure they listen to us.’

‘But how?’ Amber said, putting the question to the group as a whole.

After a short silence, it was Ruby who finally spoke. ‘We could throw a party here,’ she said. ‘To celebrate the defeat of the Technos and welcome the city kids back home. We could raffle off this stuff on the night, that way we make everybody happy and don’t look like we’re being ungrateful giving everything back.’

‘That’s a great idea Ruby,’ Amber said, and the rest of the tribe murmured their agreement. ‘We can have the meeting with the tribe leaders while everyone else is enjoying themselves. It’ll take a lot of organisation, though.’

‘I don’t mind doing it,’ Ruby replied. ‘But I might need a bit of help with the raffle.’

‘Leave that to me babe,’ Lex offered. ‘I know how to give the punters what they want.’

‘Um…thanks Lex,’ Amber said, somewhat surprised at his change of heart over the gifts. ‘Now that that’s out of the way, then, I want to move onto something else. I’m sure you’re all aware that I haven’t quite been myself lately. I want to apologise to you all.’

‘Don’t be silly Amber!’ Trudy said. ‘You have nothing to apologise for!’

‘Thanks Trudy. Nevertheless, I’ve decided that things have to change, especially when I have Bray to look after as well.’

‘What are you saying Amber?’ Ellie asked.

‘Just that I’m going to be taking more of a back seat in the tribe for a while. I need to sort myself out properly, and to spend more time with my baby. I’m sure Lex and Jay will be able to manage without me.’

In answer, Trudy, Salene and Ellie all got up and gave her a hug, in a show of support and understanding. ‘Alright then everybody,’ she heard Jay call out behind her. ‘I think that’s everything for tonight. Let’s all get some rest.’ With a screech of chairs against floor, most of the tribe dispersed. Jay put a hand on her arm before following them out, leaving her standing in the café with the other three girls. It was at that moment she knew that with their help she had the best possible chance of getting her life back on track.

Jay had a spring in his step as he went down the stairs from the café to the main courtyard where he found Sammy, Lottie and Bonnie playing some sort of game that required them to run around the Phoenix statue chasing each other. In his current good mood, feeling optimistic about Amber’s recovery and the future of their relationship - ok, so he was still sleeping on the floor, but he was hopeful that with Amber more and more like her old self every day, she would be able to confide in him again - he didn’t notice Bonnie running straight towards him and looking in the opposite direction.

‘Umph!’ he moaned as she ran into his legs. ‘Are you alright?’

‘Hide me!’ she laughed, running behind him just as Sammy and Lottie burst out from the other side of the statue. Sammy had something on his wrist that was obviously supposed to be a Techno zapper, and he proceeded to point it at the giggling Lottie.

‘Take that Evil Elsa!’ he said, pulling his arm back and pretending to shoot.

‘Nooooo!’ Lottie cried, before performing a very slow and dramatic death.

Jay’s ears had pricked up at the sound of the familiar name, and he proceeded to march over to the pair. The anger he felt inside was obviously sensed by them both as Lottie quickly picked herself up from the floor and Sammy came to stand next to her, fingering his zapper as if wishing it were real.

‘How did you know that name?’ Jay shouted, then noticed the card he had found on the body in the street pinned to Lottie’s chest. ‘Where did you get this card?’ he asked, ripping it off. ‘I gave this to Spinner! How did you get it? Tell me!’

‘It’s Bonnie’s!’ Sammy shouted back, pointing behind Jay. ‘She found it outside the mall!’

Turning around, Jay saw Bonnie running off further into the mall and shouted after her. ‘Bonnie! BONNIE!’ Giving chase he easily caught up to the girl, dragging her back to the others perhaps a little more roughly than he intended. All three of the children fixed him with angry stares. ‘These two say they got this card from you Bonnie,’ he said. ‘Is this true?’ The little girl nodded slightly. ‘Where did you get it?’ he asked.

‘I found it!’ she sobbed. ‘It’s mine!’

‘I gave this to somebody to look after! Don’t lie to me! How did you get it?’

‘She didn’t want it! She threw it away! I found it, it’s mine! Give it back!’

‘She can’t have done, she wouldn’t do that! Tell the truth!’

‘It is the truth!’ Bonnie shouted back. Finally managing to wriggle free from his grip she ran off in tears.

He turned back to Lottie and Sammy, causing them to run off too. ‘I’m telling Salene!’ Sammy yelled as he ran.

Sitting on the steps, Jay held the card out in front of him and stared at it. There was no doubt about it, it was definitely the same card he had given to Spinner. Bonnie had been adamant that she was telling the truth, but how could she possibly have got it otherwise? In the back of his mind doubts rose about Spinner, about how she had changed since he first knew her. Who should he believe? What should he do? The rain pounded harder on the roof, and he thought he heard the rumblings of distant thunder. Why, just as everything seemed to be turning around for the better, did things have to get so much more complicated?

Ellie wandered sleepily into the café to make herself a cup of coffee. Most of the rest of the tribe had gone back to bed to make up for the disturbance the night before, but it was well into the morning, and although they might not have much to do today, she did. Jack needed his exercises for one thing, and it was also her turn to make the midday meal, still without power - she wished that the new Technos, or Technicians, or whatever they wanted to call themselves now, would hurry up and sort the supply out soon - she had grown used to living a half-normal life again. As she poured the coffee into a mug and sat down at one of the tables, she realised she was not alone; Ruby sat in a corner reading by candlelight, and appeared not to have noticed Ellie’s presence.

‘Good book?’

Ruby jumped slightly then smiled. ‘Oh, hi Ellie. I’m just doing some crossword puzzles, trying to focus my mind.’

‘Oh? Any particular reason?’

Ruby looked thoughtful for a moment. ‘Sort of.’ It looked to Ellie as if she were about to say more, but then she was distracted by her crossword. ‘Hey, you’re a journalist right?’

‘Well, kind of,’ she replied.

‘Any ideas for this one? “News report to hide information on date of birth”. Eight letters.’

Ellie worried her bottom lip with her teeth in thought for a short while, then stated triumphantly ‘Coverage!’

‘Cover age, coverage. Yes!’ Ruby cried in delight, scribbling the answer in. ‘You’re good.’ Again she looked like she wanted to say something. Intrigued, Ellie decided not to let this chance slip away - it was time to pry!

‘Is there something you want to say Ruby?’ she asked. ‘Whatever it is, you can trust me.’

‘Well…I suppose two heads are better than one. It’s something May and I saw the other day when we went out to look for food. It’s been bothering me ever since.’

‘What is it?’ Ellie asked.

‘Two of them, just lying in the street. Dead Technos.’

‘You mean Technicians?’

‘No, these were the old kind, in their uniforms. May seemed pretty calm about the whole thing, said they’d got on the wrong side of somebody during the evacuation, but there was something…odd, about the whole thing. I just can’t put my finger on it.’

‘Let me guess…no bruises?’

Ruby gasped. ‘That’s it! Of course! Wait a minute,’ she said, her eyes narrowing. ‘You know something. Spill.’

‘Alright, but not a word to Jay!’ Ruby nodded. ‘When Spinner came to look at Jack I heard them talking about a Techno that Jay and the others found dead in the street on their way back from the hotel that day. The only mark on her was a small puncture wound on one arm. She was wearing civilian clothes but they found a Techno ID card on her, naming her as Elsa. Spinner recognised the name - apparently she was one of a group of Technos that went missing a while back.’

‘And you think this could be connected?’

‘Well, there’s only one way to find out.’

‘Look for the same mark on the bodies,’ Ruby nodded with a grimace. ‘I’m going into the city this afternoon with Darryl to let people know about the party tonight. If they’re still there I’ll take a look.’

‘Are you sure? It’ll be pretty gruesome.’

‘Sure. It’s not like any of us haven’t seen a dead body before, and besides, I can’t let a good puzzle go unsolved.’

‘Great! Maybe you could quiz Darryl on where exactly they found the other one while you’re out there? It might be useful to map out where they’re being found.’

‘You think there might be more?’

‘What are you two girls whispering about?’ Gel asked, appearing in the café.

‘Oh, you know. Nothing really.’ Ruby answered.

‘If you say so,’ Gel said, sounding unconvinced but not interested enough to push the matter. ‘Anyway, I’ve got something to show you. Bonnie! Come along now! You two can be the first to see!’ Bonnie entered the café wearing what was evidently the new outfit Gel had been making for her. The new dress was not dissimilar to the old one she had worn on her arrival at the mall, but where the old dress had looked, to put it bluntly, like a patched-up cloth sack, this one was a much nicer affair that fit the little girl perfectly. It was golden brown in colour, matching the gold stars at the corner of her eyes. The old dress had obviously been used as inspiration - a multitude of green patches in various shades served as a pattern, forming a line running diagonally from top to bottom. Over the dress she wore a little green waistcoat.

‘Are you okay Bonnie?’ Ruby asked. ‘Gel, she looks like she’s been crying.’

‘Oh yeah, Jay had a go at her, something about some card that the Techno girl threw away and Bonnie found, only Jay didn’t believe her, probably because he fancies that tramp.’ Ellie and Ruby shared a meaningful look, while Gel put a comforting arm around Bonnie. ‘But anyway, what do you think?’

‘I think it’s gorgeous!’ Ruby beamed.

‘Thank you! Ellie?’

‘Yeah. Nice work Gel.’ It pained her to say it, but the girl had actually done a good job.

Gel beamed and ushered Bonnie downstairs. ‘Come on then, let’s go see who else is around. Bye, you two!’

The pair waited until Gel was out of earshot before continuing their conversation. ‘So what’s the deal with this card then?’ Ruby asked.

‘Well, coming from Gel I wouldn’t be too sure on its accuracy, but if Bonnie’s telling the truth then Spinner’s definitely up to something. She specifically asked to keep that card.’ And if she lied about that…

‘I’m sure what she told you about Jack was true,’ Ruby said, putting her hand on top of Ellie’s. Ellie smiled back gratefully.

‘Either way,’ she said. ‘I think your puzzle just turned out to have a whole lot more pieces than we first thought.’

‘Well it’s a good job I like a challenge.’

‘That makes two of us,’ Ellie said, as outside a loud thunderclap broke across the sky.

Jay pulled up the hood of his camouflage jacket as he stepped out into the storm, determination on his face. Water splashed up from his boots as he ran through the saturated streets, his only aim being to get to the power station as quickly as he could. Elsa’s ID card was gripped so tightly in his hand that he could no longer feel it digging into his skin. He had to ask her for himself. He had to know for sure.

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Whoaaaa… This is becoming a thriller or? Like solving the mistery of the dead Technos… NCSI with the MALL RATS :flushed::flushed::flushed:

And yeah… You get Lex well… Just wanted to shook and slap him like always :rofl:

(I posted yesterday)

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Yes, this is the part of the story where things have settled down a bit after the events at the hotel so the new storylines are going to start to ramp up! I’m looking forward to sharing them with people again. :smiley:

Haha, I think there will be several points coming up where you will want to shake Lex… Just to warn you! :rofl:

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Excitingly I’ve found some pretty detailed notes for the unfinished portion of this story so that should make it easier to pick things up again. I knew the main points but a lot of the details - timings, order of events, etc. were a bit fuzzy so I’m very pleased by my past self’s forward thinking!

Chapter 20: Power and Chaos

The bars of the sturdy steel gate reminded Jay of a prison cell. He clung to them, staring through the gaps at the building beyond - the Sector 6 Power Station. Encircled by a 12 foot high concrete wall topped with barbed wire, the graffiti on its outer face still proclaiming the Second Coming of Zoot, it was designed to stop people from coming in. Getting inside wouldn’t be a problem, however, as the gate at which he stood was unlocked. He just didn’t know if he wanted to go in. As much as he was afraid of what he might find out, though, he was more afraid of not knowing, of having to watch his back and guard his tongue whenever Spinner was near. With a heavy sigh he pushed open the gate, the squeaking noise it made increasing his feelings of unease, but as he walked through the empty yard to the entrance of the building his determination grew with every step. Reaching the door to the main building he pulled it open and stepped inside, the sound of the rain outside becoming muffled as he entered. Like every other building in the city, the power station had been ransacked by the tribes in the early days after the Virus, but the Technos had not bothered to clean up the place beyond what was necessary when they arrived and so the place still looked desolate. The floor of the entrance hall he stood in had been swept clear of debris, now pushed up against the walls, and a Techno ‘T’ had been painted in the middle of the floor over the power station’s original crest, but this half-hearted attempt at aesthetic improvement only served to make the flaws stand out more.

Getting to the main generator room was easy - he simply had to follow the corridors that had been cleared of broken furniture and other rubbish. Strip lights flickered eerily, illuminating his path in fits and starts. Evidently the building’s own emergency generator was working. Soon enough the corridors brought him out into a huge room filled with large pieces of machinery, most of which he didn’t know the names for or what they did. At one end stood the massive generator used for powering the city and in front of this railings lined a sizeable hole where he could look down on the floor below. About twenty Technicians were milling about down there, some working at machines, others wandering around with clipboards, but all wearing the white uniform decorated with yellow lightning bolts that he had seen Spinner wearing earlier. She didn’t appear to be with them, though. Above him a walkway along the walls created an upper floor, with doors leading to offices of some description. That seemed to be the best place to start looking for her.

‘Jay, get away from there!’ an anxious voice came from behind him, and he turned to see Tag coming out of a nearby door, zipping up his white top.

‘Where is she Tag?’ he demanded.

‘Who? Spinner? I’ll tell you, just please come into my office! If Cable sees you here…I’m supposed to be on security!’

‘Glad to see you’re taking your job seriously - I wasn’t exactly sneaking in here.’

‘Yeah well I was busy,’ Tag replied. ‘Now please, get in here!’

‘Alright, alright,’ Jay said, following him back through the door into what must have been the workers’ staff room before the Virus. A number of comfy chairs lined the walls and holes marked the area where a darts board had once hung. A couple of desks had been dragged in from somewhere, forming an L-shape in a corner of the room. One held papers and files, the other a monitor that flickered between low quality CCTV images of the entrance hall and the two lower floors of the generator room. A screen blocked off an area at the back of the room, which was probably where Tag slept. The pair of them were not alone in the room - a young woman with medium length blonde hair was perched on the end of one of the desks. ‘You were busy, were you?’ he whispered to Tag, who coloured slightly.

‘Erm, you remember Link don’t you Jay?’ Tag said, trying to hide his embarrassment by fetching a towel from behind the screened off area and handing it to Jay. Jay nodded at Link, who nodded back, then took the towel and dried himself off as best he could before handing it back.

‘So where is she?’

Tag sighed ‘Her office is just up the stairs, the first one you come to,’ he said. ‘But if you’re going to see her please watch out for Cable. He doesn’t seem to like you very much.’

‘I’ve noticed,’ Jay said grimly. ‘Thanks for the warning. I’ll let you two get back to whatever it was you were doing.’

‘Erm, yeah, thanks. Did you find that report Link?’

‘Hmm?’ she replied. ‘Oh. Oh, that report. No, sorry I couldn’t find it anywhere.’

Jay shook his head and made a hasty exit, heading straight for Spinner’s office, metal clinking under his boots as he made his way up the stairs.

‘Come in!’ he heard her muffled voice call through the door as he knocked on it. ‘Jay!’ she cried as he went inside, getting out of her seat. ‘What a lovely surprise! Ooh, I’ve got some news for you - I think we’ll be ready for the big switch-on this afternoon. Isn’t that wonderful?’

‘I suppose so,’ he said.

‘What’s wrong?’ she frowned. ‘Is it Jack?’

He shook his head. ‘I’ve been wracking my brains,’ he said. ‘But I just can’t seem to find a reason to explain this .’ He held up the identity card and her eyes widened. ‘Well?’

‘Jay, I can explain. It’s not what you think.’

‘And what is that exactly? Right now I don’t know what to think.’

‘Whatever it is that you’re thinking, that’s not it,’ she said, sounding slightly annoyed. ‘Close the door.’ He looked at her stubbornly. ‘Jay, please! Just close the door. Nobody else needs to hear this.’ He slammed the door and she winced. ‘Thank you,’ she said calmly, sitting back down.

‘This had better be good.’

Spinner closed her eyes, trying to decide what to say. When she opened them again they did not hold their usual sparkle. ‘I lied to you Jay,’ she said.

‘I’ve figured that much out already, Spinner.’

‘You wanted the truth so let me finish!’ she snapped. ‘Look, I’m sorry alright? I did know more about Elsa than I told you.’

‘Well who was she? And why did you throw the card away? Don’t you care about what happened to her?’

‘Of course I do! I just…I panicked, Jay. If Cable ever found out…’

‘Cable again! What does this have to do with Cable?’

‘Everything Jay! They…Elsa and Cable were together. They were as close as you and I used to be,’ she said sadly.

‘Oh.’

‘Yes. He never believed the official story that she and the others had run away, only nobody else would back him up. They either laughed off his ‘conspiracy theories’ or kept their heads down. Kept our heads down,’ she said guiltily. ‘He threatened to go straight to Ram and accuse him of doing away with them all, but we…we stopped him.’

Jay detected the hesitation. ‘What do you mean ‘stopped him’? What did you do? And who’s we?’

‘He had a death wish Jay! If he’d gone to Ram he’d have been deleted for sure! He blamed himself for taking a promotion to another project, away from her. He thought if he’d stayed with her he could have protected her from whatever happened.’

‘What did you do?’

‘We did what had to be done to make him see sense. To save his life. It’s none of your concern. I shouldn’t even be telling you this much. All you need to know is that Cable was devastated when Elsa disappeared. If he found out about this he would fall to pieces again, and we need him Jay. The city needs him.’

‘Why didn’t you just tell me this before?’

‘I don’t know! I panicked! I didn’t know…I didn’t know if I could trust you.’

‘Yeah well now the feeling’s mutual.’

There was a long pause. ‘Jay?’ Spinner finally asked. ‘It’s never going to be like it was before is it? With us?’

He shook his head. ‘The Technos changed us both. Maybe Ram was right to separate us. It was never going to work. You should probably tell that to Tag and Link, spare them all this.’

At that moment Spinner’s pager beeped. ‘It’s Cable,’ she said. ‘He wants to see everyone about the switch-on. I have to go.’

‘He has a right to know, Spinner. You can’t leave him wondering forever, blaming himself for what happened.’

Spinner sighed. ‘He doesn’t blame himself anymore, Jay. He blames you.’

‘Me?!’ he spluttered, taken aback by this new piece of information. ‘What did I do?’

‘You were the only one who would stand up to Ram,’ she told him. ‘He respected you, but in his eyes you betrayed us when you left the Technos. Then of course he realised that the only reason he was promoted was because of the reshuffle of personnel after your departure. It was just another reason to hate you.’

‘I see,’ he said, not seeing at all. ‘Well, you should probably go anyway. He’ll be waiting for you.’

‘I’d better call for Link and Tag first,’ she said. ‘I doubt they got the message. I’m sorry Jay, for everything.’

‘Goodbye Spinner,’ he said, and left the room.

On his way back to the mall he tried to go over everything in his head. Cable blamed him for the death of Elsa. No wonder he hated him so much. And Spinner…what had she done? What kind of person had she become? Certainly not one he could trust anymore. Sighing he wondered if any other nasty surprises would be in store for him that day. At least it had stopped raining.

Ellie gingerly held the blade to Jack’s throat. ‘I’m sorry baby,’ she said. ‘I hope this doesn’t hurt too much.’ It had been a while since Jack had last had a shave, and he was getting pretty fuzzy. Although frightened of cutting him, she had been telling him all about the party and had convinced herself that he would wake up for it, and it was therefore her duty to make sure he looked presentable.

‘Nothing much has happened since this morning,’ she told him. ‘Ruby and Darryl have gone out to get some food and to tell people about the party. Ruby’s going to have a look for those Techno bodies - remember I told you about them? It’s really exciting! Just like working on the Amulet again, only without you of course. After tonight though you’ll be better, and can help us out. I’ve washed your favourite shirt for you, for the party. We’ll have this mystery solved in no time once you’re back. You’ve probably solved it already inside that brilliant mind of yours anyway!’ She paused, admiring her handiwork. Nearly done and she hadn’t cut him once! ‘Hmm, what else?’ she mused. ‘Oh, nobody can find Jay anywhere. He’s probably gone to the power station to see Spinner about the ID card. I hope he’s alright. I didn’t tell anybody what I thought, but I’m sure he can look after himself. I don’t think she’ll hurt him. Oh! I’m sorry! I’m so sorry!’ she had been a bit overzealous with the razor just under his chin, but had she been imagining it or had he flinched? Nervously picking up the razor again she deliberately nicked the other side of his chin. Definitely nothing that time. As the tiny spot of blood welled up on his skin she burst into tears and dabbed at it with her handkerchief. ‘Oh Jack!’ she sobbed. ‘I’m sorry for being so stupid! I thought you flinched! Please come back to me, I love you so much!’ Laying down beside him on the bed she buried her face in his chest and wept, as she had done many times before, and feared she would do many times again.

He felt the weight of her against his chest again, and the stinging of the cuts on his face. He heard her crying and wanted to cry with her. Why weren’t these stupid exercises working? But then, maybe he had flinched. He couldn’t remember. He felt as though he had flinched, but then he also felt as though he was putting his arms around Ellie right now, and he knew he wasn’t. He would rather die than live like this for the rest of his life.

‘Where have you been?’ Amber asked as Jay walked into the room.

‘I…had some things I needed to sort out,’ he replied.

‘What’s wrong Jay? You look like you’ve seen a ghost. Whatever it is you can tell me.’

Jay shook his head. ‘It’s not important right now. How have you been?’

‘Alright I guess. I just put Bray down for his nap.’

‘It’s good that you can spend time with him again,’ he told her absently, his mind still on Spinner and Cable.

‘Gel popped by earlier looking for you,’ she said, changing the subject, although he wished she hadn’t when he realised what it was.

‘Gel? Why would she…oh.’ He let out a small groan. ‘Oh no, could this day possibly get any worse?’

‘She…she left something for you,’ Amber said, producing a box from under the bed, unsure after his reaction as to whether she should give it to him. ‘What is it?’ she asked.

Jay sighed. ‘She said she was going to make me some clothes. Instead of this.’ He gestured to his Techno uniform. Amber beamed in delight. ‘It’s not funny!’ he complained, then after a while relented. ‘Maybe it is a little funny.’

‘Aren’t you going to have a look?’ Amber asked eagerly.

‘I guess it can’t be any worse than the box,’ he said, wincing at the bright pink monstrosity tied with a pink ribbon. ‘Can it?’ Gingerly he reached for the box, unwrapping it and taking off the lid as if whatever was inside might leap out and attack him. ‘Well at least she’s consistent,’ he announced. ‘The tissue paper’s pink too.’

Amber giggled. ‘Hurry up! The suspense is killing me here!’

He removed the first layer of tissue paper and was relieved to find a normal looking pair of black trainers. ‘So far so good,’ he said. By the time he reached the bottom of the box, a whole outfit was laid out on the bed. As well as the footwear, this consisted of a pair of faded black jeans with chains hanging down the sides and silver flames on the lower legs, a charcoal-coloured tank top with another silver flame emblazoned across the chest, and a black leather motorbike jacket with numerous silver-coloured studs and zips, and another flame over the right breast pocket.

‘I think it suits you!’ Amber said as he tried it on and stood in front of the mirror.

‘Well…I guess I can live with it,’ he replied before flashing a smile to show that he was joking. Amber gave him a playful punch on the arm.

‘Squeeeeeeeeeee!’ A high-pitched shriek of delight announced the arrival of Gel, with Trudy close behind wearing an apologetic look. ‘I knew you’d love it!’ she said, bouncing up and down and clapping her hands. ‘See, Trudy! I told you the chains wouldn’t be too much.’

‘Yes, Gel’ Trudy replied. ‘Jay, tell her it’s wonderful and I’ll go and sedate her.’

‘Thank you Gel,’ he said. ‘It’s great.’ He wasn’t sure how it was possible but her smile became even wider. He hoped it didn’t lock in place.

‘Alright then, Little Miss Fashion Designer,’ Trudy said, taking Gel by the shoulders and steering her out of the doorway. ‘Let’s go find you a nice padded room. Bye guys.’

‘Bye,’ Amber and Jay echoed, smiling at each other.

‘Aren’t you done yet?’ Slade joked as he watched Ebony getting ready for the party.

‘No,’ she replied, fixing another feather into her hair. ‘I have to make sure I look my best, don’t I?’

He hopped off the bed and walked over to her dressing table, where he began to kiss her neck. ‘You always look your best,’ he said to her reflection in the mirror.

‘That’s the right answer,’ she said, turning her neck to lock lips in a passionate kiss. When they had both come up for air she rose from her chair and headed for the door.

‘Where are you going?’ he asked her.

‘To the little girls’ room,’ she answered. ‘Don’t go anywhere.’

As she left the room he plonked himself back down on the bed and scratched his head. He didn’t think he would ever understand women. As he put his hand down he caught sight of the bright blue pentagram that now adorned the back of it and scowled. It was like it burned, he hated it that much. He had always been independent before, a free spirit, but now look at him. He was part of a tribe, stuck in a shopping mall of all places, because of Ebony. He loved her, or at least he thought he did, but was this really what he wanted? Perhaps he was going soft. He had even been willing to give up everything when he thought that Ruby was pregnant with his child. It was like he was becoming a different person. In irritation he tried to rub off the Mallrats pentagram, but only succeeded in smudging it. Then an idea started to form in his head, slowly at first then building up momentum, and before he knew it he had grabbed his coat and rucksack and bolted out of the room as fast as his legs could carry him.

‘Those farm kids sure drive a hard bargain,’ Darryl complained, making a face at the contents of the wheelbarrow he was pushing.

‘Yeah well everybody needs food after all the chaos of the evacuation, so they can charge pretty much whatever they like.’ Ruby replied, handing a flyer to a passerby. Having run an establishment that required a regular supply of food and drink by herself, she was well aware of how prices could shoot up when there was trouble in the city. She tried not to think about what was happening to the place without her there to keep an eye on things, as not only did her mind come up with increasingly worrying scenarios, but it led to the inevitable thoughts as to when, if ever, she would see the saloon or even Liberty again. That was the reason she was here. Partly. Technically she and Darryl had been sent out into the city to bring back some food and to hand out flyers for the party that night, but what she was really interested in was the mystery of the Techno bodies. She had always escaped her worries by throwing herself into a challenging puzzle - it seemed to focus her mind and help her to sort out whatever was troubling her - so what better way to take her mind off home than this? Of course she had been looking after Lottie as well, but the girl was spending more and more time with Sammy and Bonnie, which meant that Ruby was spending more and more time on her own with her thoughts. Ellie had told her of some of the things she had done while working on a newsletter with Jack, and she had to admit that she was excited about being a part of this latest adventure. Sure it was going to be dangerous, especially if whoever was responsible for the deaths ever found out about their investigation, but then that was half the appeal.

‘I’m out of flyers,’ Darryl said, handing his last one to a couple of scruffy-looking youngsters.

‘Why don’t you just go and talk to that group over there about the party while I hand the last of mine out. Then we’ll call it a day.’ She pointed to a group of girls further up the street and waited until Darryl was halfway towards them before nipping into a side street. This was the perfect opportunity. It wasn’t far from here to where she and May had found the bodies and with any luck she would be able to find out what she wanted to know before Darryl came looking for her. After a couple of minutes she found herself on the familiar street. It became immediately clear, however, that the bodies had vanished. This was definitely the place where she had spotted them and called a reluctant May over to take a look, but now all that was there was the rubbish and building rubble that had been there before. Nothing to distinguish it from any other alley in the city. On a whim, she decided to investigate the alley further, taking a step closer into the shadows.

Suddenly she heard a noise behind her and whirled around, heart racing, to see Darryl refilling the wheelbarrow with the food they had bought after stumbling into a pile of cardboard boxes.

‘Darryl!’ she cried, annoyed that she had been spooked by him, and that he had managed to find her so quickly. ‘What are you doing here?’

‘Those girls kind of…ran off…when they saw me coming, then I saw you going down here so I followed you. What are you doing here anyway? The main streets are back that way,’ he said, pointing with his thumb. ‘It’s not safe in this part of the city.’

‘I remembered coming this way with May the other day looking for food. One of her contacts lives around here. We could use something extra to take back.’ All true, if not exactly the whole truth.

‘I thought you said we had enough? I would have come with you if you’d told me.’

‘I can take care of mys…’ she let out a scream before she could finish what she had been about to say and fell to her knees as somebody pulled hard on her hair. A hooded figure rushed out from the alleyway behind her and she felt the tension ease away from her scalp as the hold on her hair was released. Before she could do anything, however, the figure knocked Darryl clean over - her fellow Mallrat fell to the ground with a sickening thud suggesting that he had not just been pushed - and ran off with the wheelbarrow.

‘Darryl? Are you okay?’ Ruby asked tentatively, but received no reply. ‘Darryl? Help! Please, someone help!’

In a nearby building the figure tossed the rock darkened with the male’s blood atop the vegetables in the wheelbarrow and removed its hood. They hated doing these things personally, but ‘assistants’ were becoming rare. As they unclenched their fist, they found strands of the female’s blonde hair in their hand and chuckled, picking them up carefully and sniffing them. An unexpected prize but this would do nicely. Oh yes. This would do very nicely indeed.

First, though, there was a meeting to attend. Something else that had to be tolerated, but it would do no good to be late.

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Uhuuu… I sensed Spinner and Jay were somehow deeper… But that deepm… Uhuuu… Guys running through girls… Like I always say​:joy::see_no_evil::smirk:

Slade :scream::scream::scream::scream:

Poor Jack :sob::sob::sob:

Jay’s new style is biker style!? Yeah that might work for him! Did Gel choose the flames to set a point to him being “hot”? :joy:

Darryl and Ruby… It made me want to go to their rescue at once… The attacker sounds zombie like… :see_no_evil:

(I always do lots of notes and write down scenes in several versions. It absolutely helps to not loose track! I will post tomorrow again!)

Haha, Jay really doesn’t do well on his own, does he? I liked your explanation for that in All of Me. I love your reasoning behind the flames on his new outfit too! I don’t think there was any particular meaning to it when I created his new style but I can totally see Gel including them for that reason so that is now canon!

Haha, I often get that reaction about Slade’s decision here. I guess this is the first opportunity he’s had since Mega died to really think about his situation and his future.

Poor Jack indeed, although the fact that he can now feel touch is progress.

Hmm, ‘zombie like’ is a fair description of our mystery character…

Looking forward to your new chapter. :slight_smile:

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‘lol’ There you go…we’re working together here in a way…lol…

Yeah in my new chapter Jay finally changes too. Indeed I always thought when he left why he didn’t get lost of the ‘T’ and that terrible shirt. Irgs. The Technos were sure not stylish.

Yes…it is like that for the big brothers…Jay was forced to take care for Ved. Bray was kind of in duty to Martin/Brady and later the Mall Rats, Slade was always on the run and search. In your story he has now lost the reason for his travelling in a way. Mega is gone (how sad!sniff)…but I am worried what that might do with Ebony. (A moment in the last chapters I thought you would go an all new way and make Slade and Amber have an affair…!)

I keep my fingers crossed for Jack for sure!

It is definitively creepy…with the hair smelling and all. (Is it maybe the Guardian? Would suit the crazy maniac!)

I am curious if Gel will see her new crush again and how he will melt into the story.

Oh and by the by…Jay reacted a litte slow, didn’t he? Amber was all delighted and eager to see him in something new and was like shooting little hearts at him , but Mr General wasn’t aware…lol(thats how I pictured it anyway!)


(Just updated…)

Hmm, Jay was really wary about what was going to be in the box from Gel! He’s not a big fan of change, and his Techno uniform was something he had to wear so he hasn’t actually had to think about his own self-image for a long time. Also he still has a lot on his mind from his visit to the hotel so his focus isn’t completely in the room in this scene! Whereas Amber thinks it’s hilarious and is having a great time!

Oh yeah, Ebony is NOT going to be happy. She literally just told him not to go anywhere…

At least one of your questions will be answered in the next chapter. :wink:

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Yeah… Jay is level headed. Too much sometimes. That’s always something I like to crack up in him… Be more… Well… Human in a way. Realer. But it is a good sign that Amber has recovered that way that she can watch him in new things and like it…

If I were Ebony… Whoaaaa… I would so give him a good run… Lol… I hate when people do this… Just taking a run. Ts.

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So here we go, the first of two chapters covering the big tribal party. I remember these being lots of fun to write!

I’ve been posting chapters every five days recently but I’m going to up that slightly to every four days now. This is to give me more of an incentive to continue with the as yet unfinished chapter 36 as it will mean that it will be posted on the same day I posted chapter 35 all those years ago. Wish me luck! :sweat_smile:

Chapter 21: Crashing the Party

Not knowing where he was going or for how long, Slade stepped out of the mall and onto the street. At least the hard part - getting out unseen - was now over. All that was left was for him to choose a direction. West was as good as any, he thought, and so he started walking. He wasn’t completely free, though. There was still the problem of Ebony. He supposed he would have to go back for her at some point, but right now he just needed some space.

The power in the city had still not been restored and so, as it was getting dark, most of the city folk were indoors. A couple of blocks away from the mall, however, he caught sight of a couple of drunkards staggering towards him. Thinking nothing of it he carried on walking but as they got closer he recognised the pair. It was Darryl and Ruby! Hoping it wasn’t too late he quickly changed direction and picked up the pace a little.

‘Slade?’

Just keep walking , he told himself, pretending he hadn’t heard.

‘Slade! Where are you going? Darryl’s hurt!’

‘Rats!’ he muttered. Back to the mall it was, then. He could hardly walk away now. With a sigh he stopped and walked over to the pair. ‘What happened?’ he asked, helping Ruby to shift some of Darryl’s weight onto himself. He was still hurt and confused about the baby situation, but he managed to push all the questions he had for Ruby to the back of his mind. Now was not the time.

‘Ugh!’ Darryl complained.

‘Someone jumped us and ran off with the food,’ Ruby answered. ‘And before you ask I didn’t get a good look at whoever it was. The coward was wearing a hood.’

‘Are you alright?’

‘Me? I’m fine, it was Darryl who got whacked in the head! Anyway, where were you going in such a hurry?’

‘Oh, nowhere.’

‘Mmhmm, did you tell Ebony you were leaving?’

‘I wasn’t leaving,’ he said.

‘Whatever you say, Slade. Don’t you think I haven’t thought about leaving a hundred times?’

‘What’s stopping you?’ he asked. ‘Don’t tell me you’re becoming a city girl now Ruby?’

‘No way!’ she said. ‘But this place isn’t so bad. Your problem is you never stick around anywhere long enough to find out.’

In a short while they arrived back at the mall, entering to find Amber strolling around the entrance hall with Bray.

‘Oh no, Darryl!’ she exclaimed when she saw the group. ‘Ruby what happened?’

As Ruby explained to Amber about the attack, Slade went to fetch a chair for Darryl. When he returned a small crowd had congregated at the foot of the stairs. Ellie and Lottie were fussing over Ruby, while Darryl stood a little way off with Amber, holding a hand to his head and looking a little confused. To his dismay Ebony was also there. As soon as she caught sight of his coat and bag she gave him a look that told him she would be having words with him later, and not good ones.

‘Guys leave me alone, I’m fine!’ Ruby said to the two girls standing with her. Slade went over and put the chair down, helping Darryl into it.

‘Thanks Slade,’ Amber said. ‘Ellie, can you fetch the first aid box from my room?’

Ellie nodded. ‘We’ll talk later,’ he heard her say to Ruby as she left.

‘Lottie can you take Bray somewhere less hectic for a while?’

‘You mean “get out of the way, Lottie”. Don’t worry, I’m going.’ Always one to know when she was surplus to requirements, Lottie took the baby and left.

‘Slade, Ebony,’ Amber continued. ‘Thanks for the help. I think we’ve got things covered now.’

‘I guess that’s our cue to leave,’ he told Ebony. She just scowled at him and pushed him towards the stairs. On the way up they passed Ellie returning with the first aid kit. He looked back long enough for him to see her give it to Amber, and for Amber to begin cleaning Darryl’s wound, before Ebony gave him another shove. Oh dear. This was not going to be pleasant.

A couple of hours later he found himself lying in bed with his hands behind his head and a smile on his face. Downstairs he heard music and voices, telling him that the party was in full swing. He and Ebony, however, had decided to have a party of their own. After she had stopped throwing things at him, anyway. Perhaps Ruby was right - maybe the city was bearable. For a little while longer, at least.

Salene frowned as she watched Lex talking to a group of people on the other side of the room. The Technicians had finally managed to restore the power so she couldn’t hear what they were saying over the party music, but she had a feeling it was dodgy. For one thing, most of the group had their faces painted to look like some sort of reptile - a dragon, she supposed - and all of them had at least one piercing. They just looked like trouble. She shook her head as Lex began shaking hands with them. They had barely had time to settle back into the mall after defeating the Technos and already the guy was up to his usual tricks! She hoped he knew what he was doing.

‘Salene?’

She nearly jumped out of her skin. ‘Oh! Hi Trudy!’

Trudy sat down beside her. ‘Sorry, did I startle you?’

‘I’m just a bit jumpy I guess.’

‘Yeah, it’s terrible what happened to Ruby and Darryl isn’t it?’

‘I know, poor Darryl. You don’t think…’ she mused. ‘It’s not going to be like the old days again is it? The tribes fighting for power?’

‘No,’ Trudy reassured her. ‘I think once the market starts up properly again everything will settle down, and there’s the meeting tonight as well, remember?’

‘Oh, of course. The tribe leaders. Who’s there for us?’

‘They decided to let two representatives from each tribe go, so Jay and Amber.’ Salene nodded, seeming satisfied with the answer. ‘Are you alright Salene?’ Trudy asked after a while. ‘You seem a little quiet.’

‘Hmm? Oh, it’s nothing. It just seems really weird to have people in the city again. I was just getting used to it being empty. Anyway, enough about me, how are you enjoying the party? Seen any cute guys?’

‘Ugh, don’t ask,’ Trudy replied. ‘I think I’m cursed. How about you? Has anyone caught your eye?’

‘Well,’ she said, somewhat reluctantly. ‘There is one guy. Over there, do you see him? With the black spiky hair?’ She pointed towards a young man facing away from them on the other side of the room. ‘I haven’t seen his face yet, but…hey! Why are you laughing? Trudy? What’s so funny?’

‘Salene!’ Trudy cried, sounding shocked but amused. ‘That’s Jay!’

‘What? No, that’s not…oh no!’ she said as the man turned around and gave them a smile and a wave. It was indeed Jay. How embarrassing! Trudy sat next to her with a hand over her mouth, trying unsuccessfully to stifle her laughter. ‘It’s not funny Trudy!’ she said, horrified.

‘I’m sorry,’ Trudy said, calming down a little. ‘It is a little funny though!’ She burst into giggles again only this time Salene joined in.

As the table moved awkwardly through the room, bottles of alcohol clinking on top of it, Ellie frowned and sniffed at her drink. It was definitely water, so she can’t have been hallucinating. And if she wasn’t hallucinating…

She walked over and sat on the moving table, stopping it in its tracks. Instead, Sammy and Lottie crawled out from underneath. Sammy was the first to notice that the table was no longer moving with them. ‘Lottie, quick!’ he hissed at his companion. ‘Reverse! Reverse!’

‘Not so fast, you two!’ Ellie interjected as they began to crawl back under the table.

‘Ellie!’ Sammy said in surprise, scrambling to his feet with Lottie close behind. ‘We were just…’

‘I know what you were ‘just’, Sammy. You two were trying to steal this weren’t you?’ She held up one of the half-filled bottles on the table. Sammy and Lottie looked at each other, searching for an excuse. ‘I thought you’d learned your lesson after last time,’ she said, referring to the time he drank himself unconscious after taking some of Salene’s stash.

‘Sorry Ellie,’ the two echoed. It may have sounded forced but she was satisfied.

‘Good, now go and enjoy the party.’

‘Really?’ Lottie asked. ‘We can stay?’

‘Sure, just stay away from the drinks, don’t talk to anyone creepy and don’t tell Salene I let you stay, she’ll kill me!’

‘Thanks Ellie, you’re the best!’ Sammy gushed before the pair of them wandered off arguing.

‘I told you that stupid plan wouldn’t work, Sammy!’ Lottie said.

‘What!? It was your idea in the first place!’

Ellie smiled and left the kids to their bickering. Moving through the room she came across Lex, sitting with each arm around a short-skirted blonde. ‘Hey babe,’ he leered, clearly intoxicated. ‘Fancy joining us?’

She sniffed in disdain. ‘I don’t know what’s more disgusting,’ she said. ‘The fact that you’re serious or that you think I might actually say yes.’

‘Well, Jack’s not…’

‘Stop!’ she commanded, fire in her eyes. ‘If you finish that sentence I’ll rip your tongue out and string you up with it.’

‘Ew,’ one of the girls said.

She started to leave but Lex called out after her. ‘Hey! Wait, seriously, there’s something I want to ask you.’

Against her better judgement she stayed. ‘Make it quick,’ she said, folding her arms.

‘I’m worried about Darryl. That bump on the head, do you think it affected him in any way?’

‘What do you mean? Amber seemed to think it was fine.’

‘Well look at him!’ he said, pointing across the room. ‘Usually he’s all over the chicks but tonight he can’t seem to get away fast enough! Something’s wrong.’

She followed Lex’s finger to where Darryl stood talking with a tall redhead. The girl leaned over to whisper something in his ear and he quickly took a couple of steps back, knocking over a table and almost getting into a fight with a burly Demon Dog.

‘See what I mean?’

‘Lex you are unbelievable,’ she said. ‘And that’s not a compliment,’ she added, seeing the look on his face. ‘Darryl’s not like you. Have you ever considered that he might actually have standards?’ The two girls with Lex tutted simultaneously and tossed their hair back, fixing her with a cold stare. ‘Oh, you know it’s true!’ she snapped at them. ‘Do you even know the meaning of the word ‘monogamy’ Lex?’ The blank look on his face told her that he didn’t. ‘I don’t know why I’m wasting my time here,’ she said. ‘Goodnight Lex.’

Leaving Lex and his two floosies behind she decided to go back upstairs to Jack, wondering why she’d even bothered coming to this stupid party.

Darryl looked over his shoulder to make sure that the crazy girl who wanted to do strange things with vegetables had gone before stopping. Falling into the nearest chair he closed his eyes and breathed a huge sigh of relief. When he opened them again he saw May walking towards him and his breath caught. He stood up quickly to greet her, then wished he hadn’t as he clutched his head at the sudden onset of dizziness. It soon passed, however, and he continued undeterred.

‘May!’ he shouted. She looked at him and the light-headedness returned, albeit for a different reason.

Quick! he shouted at himself. Say something smart! ‘Erm…fancy a boogie?’

Fancy a boogie? What kind of 70s nightmare world had that popped out from? Still, perhaps May was a groovy 70s chick at heart?

‘What!? Ugh, not now Darryl! I’m busy!’ His heart sank. No such luck. It was then that he noticed the two people standing behind her, and not just any old people either - it was Spinner and Cable. How embarrassing. He should have known that May wouldn’t be coming over to see him. The two Technicians were both looking at him. Cable showed no emotion whatsoever, while Spinner just smirked at his bandaged head.

He turned back to May. ‘Ah. Okay, maybe later then,’ he said. She rolled her eyes and led the two Technicians away. He sat back down meekly.

‘There you are, my little turnip!’ a familiar voice came from behind him. He jerked his head around to see Crazy Vegetable Lady looming over him, her spiky red hair looking like flames as it caught the light. He thought about pretending to faint but before he could put his plan into action he was saved by a shout from Lex.

‘Darryl! Get over here, we’re about to start!’

‘Sorry lady,’ he said gleefully. ‘But I promised I’d help with the raffle.’

‘That’s too bad,’ she pouted. ‘But it’s okay, I’ll be waiting for you.’

With a shudder he quickly got out of the chair and all but ran to Lex’s side. ‘Let’s do this!’ he said with a huge grin on his face and rubbing his hands together eagerly.

Lex gave him a funny look. ‘It’s just a raffle, Darryl,’ he said.

Gel took a long swig of the homemade punch brought by one of the guests and immediately regretted it. Ugh! It tasted like vegetables! Curling her lip in distaste she poured the contents of her plastic beaker back into the bowl and refilled it from the water jug. It was official, this was the worst party ever. The punch was bad, the music was worse and the people were boring. As she contemplated going to bed she suddenly saw a familiar face across the room and almost choked on her water. It was him! The guy who’d saved her that day at the warehouse! Hoping he hadn’t seen her yet she turned around and dug out a mirror from her bag.

‘What a mess!’ she told her reflection, rearranging her hair. When she was finally satisfied with the end result she put the mirror away, took a deep breath and turned around again, only to find herself face to chest with the man in question. Startled, she let out a scream and threw her drink at him.

‘Oops!’ she said quietly, reaching inside her bag for a handkerchief with which she began to dab at him. ‘I’m so sorry!’

‘Don’t worry about it,’ he told her. ‘It’s only water.’

She stopped dabbing. ‘I’m sorry,’ she said.

‘I shouldn’t have surprised you like that,’ he said. ‘I just saw you and had to come over. It’s Suzy isn’t it?’

She frowned. ‘No, I think you must have mistaken me for someone else,’ she said sadly. ‘My name’s Gel.’

‘Oh,’ he said, looking confused. ‘But it was definitely you in the warehouse. That’s what that guy called you. I didn’t think that it might not be your real name.’

‘Oh!’ she exclaimed, suddenly understanding. ‘You remembered that? That’s so sweet! No, I’m definitely Gel. And you are?’

‘Creg,’ he said, holding his hand out.

She took his hand and flashed him a smile. ‘Gel,’ she said.

‘I think you told me that several times already,’ he said, smiling. She laughed nervously. ‘Hey! You’re a Mallrat!’ he said, noticing the pentagram on her hand.

‘Is that a bad thing?’

‘No, no!’ he said. ‘I just didn’t realise you were a Mallrat. It’s kinda cool, I never really met one before.’

Gel smiled. ‘Thanks!’ she said. ‘Do you want something to drink?’

‘Sure,’ he said. That punch looks…’

‘Ew, no, trust me you don’t want the punch.’

‘Oh, okay, well water it is then I guess.’

He reached out for the jug but she stopped him by putting her hand over his. ‘I have a bottle of wine in my room,’ she said, batting her eyelashes. ‘If you’d like to join me.’

Creg gulped. ‘Um…I…I’d love to,’ he stammered.

She held out her hand for him to take and led him up the stairs to her room. When they arrived Bonnie was sitting on her bed playing with a doll.

‘Gel! You’re back!’ the little girl cried, before noticing Creg and fixing him with a cold stare. ‘What’s he doing here?’

‘Bonnie, manners!’ Gel chided. ‘Why don’t you go and find Lottie and Sammy so Creg and I can talk?’

Bonnie sighed and left the room with her doll, still glaring at Creg. ‘Wow,’ he said after she had left. ‘She’s very…protective, isn’t she?’

‘I guess she is,’ she shrugged. ‘Must be all that time she spent on the streets.’

‘On the streets?’

‘Yeah, the poor girl. Amber found her after the evacuation. She’d been abandoned.’

‘That’s awful! So you took her in?’ Gel nodded. ‘You’re a great girl, Gel,’ he said.

‘Anyone would have done the same,’ she said, slightly embarrassed.

‘No they wouldn’t,’ he said, brushing a strand of hair away from her face. ‘Not in this world. I think you’re very special.’ And with that he kissed her.

She wasn’t sure she deserved all the praise he had given her but she wasn’t about to complain either. Instead, she just threw her arms around him and enjoyed the moment. It was official, this was the best party ever.

Jay stood with Amber in the basement of the mall, each of them on one side of the door, greeting the tribal leaders who had arrived for the meeting. He kept touching the short black spikes on top of his head self-consciously.

‘Stop doing that!’ Amber whispered. ‘I already told you, it looks fine! You’re as bad as Gel!’

‘Sorry,’ he mumbled. ‘Is that everyone then?’

‘I think so. Should we go in and start? Jay?’

He had been distracted by the appearance of May, followed closely by Cable and Spinner. Cable glowered at him and Spinner arched an eyebrow at his new style, prompting him to touch his hair again.

‘You got room for any more?’ May asked. ‘These two want in.’

‘What for?’ Jay asked. ‘I thought you wanted no part in city politics?’

‘There’s no reason not to let them in, Jay,’ Amber said. ‘They are a tribe after all, and this is a meeting for all tribe leaders. May, can you fetch another couple of chairs?’ May nodded and left. ‘The Mallrats welcome the Technicians to this meeting,’ she said to the new arrivals. ‘And I thank you on behalf of our tribe for restoring the power.’

The pair nodded at Amber but ignored Jay completely, and went inside. ‘What was all that for?’ Jay spat. ‘“The Mallrats welcome the Technicians”? I don’t trust them!’

‘You’ve changed your tune. Whether you trust them or not we still have to be civil,’ she pointed out. ‘Or this meeting will be a disaster.’

Jay ground his teeth in frustration. As far as he was concerned, it already was a disaster.

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Uhuuuuu… Slade… Guys​:roll_eyes: give them a fight and a hot making up and all is fine again​:see_no_evil::joy:

Lex😂 Good old Lex… We hate him but still love him somehow, don’t we?!

This Creg now surprises me… Bit of fast with kissing her already after he has been nearly gentleman like while he saved her. Hmmm. Let’s me doubt him and his intentions.

Jay with black hair? Seriously?! :flushed: That’s hard to imagine somehow. Poor Darryl though :eyes:

I am curious if Amber ever gets to know that Jay and Spinner were something more then comrades… It would better for him he would tell her :see_no_evil:

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Gel moved pretty quickly herself too! :wink: Admittedly I’m not the best at writing romance.

Everyone is always shocked by Jay’s hair! In fairness, he’s having a hard time getting used to it himself, haha!

Hmm, no he and Amber haven’t had the Spinner conversation. I don’t think it’s crossed his mind to mention it. Until she turned up at the tribe leaders’ meeting he didn’t think he or Amber would see much of her again.

It just was maybe a bit surprising… He was nice but also quiet cool while saving her… And then he meets her again and us all like “Oh yes let’s get it started” without any “I have hoped I would meet you again…” or just any sweet sentences like that… (I was on an all girls school and we eould gave called them “needy” with disdain :joy: :see_no_evil: :sweat_smile:

Well it is a hard jump from dyed light blond to black. And fairly I can’t imagine James with black hair (his hair is more light brown after all…)I fear it would “ruin” his looks to me.

Well it would be a potential stress factor… But maybe it would also bring them closer of Jay opens up and tells something about that his heart has suffered serious blows too… :thinking:

Bonjour @MallRatMatt

Chapter 6 to 10 now read.

Chapter 6; Meanwhile: Enjoyed the detail into the boat owner at the start and the relationship between him and the new character Arto. He sounds hot. Hope thats not the last we see of him, I’m now having visions of him looking like how Ari Boyland does now, mmmm. :stuck_out_tongue: It’s nice to read what has been happening with the other Mall Rats finally. :slight_smile: I feel like I’m reading the actual episode because if they had more time we could of potentially seen the more in depth conversation happening with ‘May’ arranging the boat for them. It all happened very quickly on the actual show.

Chapter 7; An Adventure for Gel: The seagulls were probably laughing at her! HAHAHA. This is my favourite chapter so far as I love Gel. I was smiling from ear to ear reading this, you have her spot on. From the moment she put out the pink handkerchief to sit on up to the point she says ‘Yoo-hoo boys!’ I then loved everything she said as it was so Gel but I began to start to worry for her. Gel didn’t do a bad job trying to get away bless her. The mystery man is it Ethan? He took care of Butch which I was glad to read and Butch’s companion doing a runner was terrific. Your writing really puts images in my head, I love it. Aww there was definitely a spark between them, I do hope they meet again. :slight_smile:

Chapter 8; Sit Down You’re Rocking The Boat: Brady pulling faces at Ebony, HAHAHA. Pathetic Sammy would definitely be the one to feel sick so kudos on that. I enjoyed the Ellie and Ebony scene, got snappy Ellie on point too. :slight_smile: Poor Ellie worrying about Jack, she is going to be devastated. Nice to see May step up and I found myself liking her which doesn’t happen very often. Everyone’s words just fit perfectly and reminds me of some of the group scenes from S5 in the mall where all the characters just bounced off each other so well. Oh my Darryl getting all manly, mmmm but failing miserably, bless him, such a sweet guy. I am just hopeful he finds someone nice, please don’t be May. Oh and yes, you do write Ellie well. And to finish I am so glad Sammy was sick, MWAH.

Chapter 9; Baggage: First paragraph with Gel again was a cracker. :heart: Give her a pet seagull, HAHAHAHA. And then another favourite of mine has the next paragraph, Darryl and getting an insight into his feelings was awesome. I would be extremely happy to just read Gel and Darryl. :slight_smile: Bloody Ebony is a b!tch, slapping Darryl and badmouthing him, how dare she!!! I bloody wish he had some balls and fired back at Ebony and said he had seen what she did to Ruby! You are making me feel so many emotions from your writing, I love it. Aw that was nice of Sammy to have Darryl’s back, you have just made me like Sammy for the first time, NOOOO! :slight_smile: Gel now on the boat, enjoyed that scene. :slight_smile: A good idea to make the boat less heavy would be to get rid of the boat owner, HA! Oh wow, the last scene with Brady saying ‘home’ and Trudy crying choked me, Antonia Prebble’s performance here would of been ace!!! :slight_smile:

Chapter 10; Trader Trouble: Jay’s long legs, LOL. This is so easy to read. :slight_smile: Glad Trudy caught sight of Jay in that god forsaken black Techno uniform he is still wearing! Glad May and Darryl got one over on the boat owner, but poor Darryl still, I just want to give him a big hug. No offence but I have enjoyed reading these later chapters more as it involves more characters that I love. But it’s nice to see how the others are now getting on, it won’t be long until they are all back together. :slight_smile: Amber calling Lex ‘an animal’ was a good moment. :slight_smile: Bonnie seems nice, it would be nice to have a younger character that I actually like. I’ve got Bonnie in my head from Toy Story, HAHAHA. You have so many characters to think off, is a mass exit ahead? :stuck_out_tongue: I hope so. :speak_no_evil: God Lex is a jerk! Enjoyed the ending with Jack, its nice to read how he is doing and he is at least aware of what is going on around him.

That’s it from me today, thanks @MallRatMatt for a engaging fun morning. :slight_smile:

Aww, thanks @Jack!

Hmm, interesting. That is very different from my mental image of Arto! But that’s what I love about reading, everyone has their own picture in their heads of how the characters look to them. I saw him as more of a heavy-set stereotypical goon-type character. He’s not a major character but he’ll make the odd cameo appearance now and then.

Ah, I’m really glad you liked the Gel chapter! She’s so fun to write. In these earlier chapters I’ve modelled her a bit on Sugar Kane (Marilyn Monroe’s character in Some Like It Hot). Yes, I didn’t want her to completely fail at protecting herself - she’s survived this long after all! - but she’s no fighter. Interesting - you’re not the first to guess Ethan, but my lips are sealed.

I’ll take it as a victory that you’re warming to Sammy! Not my favourite character either but I have plans for him! Really pleased that the characters are ringing true so far.

There are indeed lots of characters to keep track of…I’m very thankful that I found my notes on what everybody is doing before picking this up again! I think that’s why I separated the hotel crew and the boat crew into two distinct chunks here rather than try and merge all the perspectives together from the start. It gave me chance to try and get everyone’s voice right before they reunite.

Thanks so much for your lovely comments and for spending your morning reading - much appreciated!

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I actually did some writing on this yesterday! Managed to finish the scene I was on. About three more to write to finish the chapter. First hurdle overcome, now just have to keep going!

For now though, the party continues…

Chapter 22: The Last Dance

May stood at the back of the crowd watching the raffle. She didn’t think much of the whole thing but there wasn’t anything better to do. Darryl was standing at the front with Lex, parading the prizes around as they were called out, like a model on some tacky game show. She was surprised that he hadn’t resorted to wearing the jewellery he was holding up.

‘Has everyone got their tickets ready?’ Lex asked, the same question he had asked before every prize. The crowd grumbled impatiently.

‘Get on with it!’ she heckled, receiving a cheer.

‘Thank you May,’ Lex replied, shooting daggers from his eyes. ‘Alright then, the winner of this beautiful set of jewellery is…number 262! Where’s number 262?’ An ugly man with his skin painted green like a lizard’s stuck his hand in the air. A girl with long, white hair clung to him adoringly. ‘Well done sir!’ Lex said. ‘An excellent present for your lady friend.’ The girl squealed in delight until the man grabbed her and pulled her away from the crowd. ‘Don’t forget to come and collect your prize later!’ Lex called out after him.

The raffle continued without further incident and May soon found herself being distracted by a conversation two girls next to her were having.

‘Isn’t he just dreamy?’ One of the girls asked her friend. May rolled her eyes. Another young fool under Lex’s spell.

‘I heard he’s a Mallrat,’ the other one said. ‘Aren’t they like celebrities around here?’

The first girl laughed. ‘Have you been living under a rock since the Virus, Tammy?’ she said. ‘Anyway hands off! I saw him first.’

May stumbled forwards as another girl, older and with flaming red hair, elbowed her out of the way to get to the other two. ‘Sorry girls,’ she said, not sounding sorry at all. ‘But he’s already spoken for.’

Getting bored of the argument, and annoyed at being pushed out of the way, May turned her attention back to the raffle. Darryl spotted her in the crowd and waved to her, and she quickly looked away. Stupid boy. Why did he have to look at her like that? She couldn’t think straight when he kept staring at her all the time.

‘See! He waved at me!’ the redhead announced proudly. Wait, they were talking about Darryl?! Suddenly she smiled as she thought of a way to get back at him for being so annoying.

‘Excuse me,’ she said in her sweetest voice, but the girls ignored her and continued their bickering. ‘Hey!’ she shouted. That got a reaction out of them.

‘What do you want?’ the redhead sneered, looking down her nose at her. Were they carrots hanging down from her necklace?! The other two girls stood on either side of her with their arms crossed. Whereas moments earlier they had all been ready to kill each other, now they stood together against what they saw as a common enemy.

‘I just thought I should let you know,’ she told them. ‘That the guy over there, the one you’re all besotted with, isn’t who you think he is.’

‘And who is he exactly?’ the redhead asked, humouring her.

‘He’s the guy who pretended to be Zoot,’ she said. The younger girls looked shaken but the redhead was going to need more convincing.

‘And how exactly do you know all this?’ she asked.

In reply she lifted her arm so that the pentagram on her hand was clearly visible. ‘She’s a Mallrat too!’ one of the younger girls cried. ‘She must know the truth! Come on Tammy, let’s go!’ That left one.

‘I still don’t believe you,’ she said stubbornly.

‘Take a look for yourself,’ May said, gesturing to Darryl. ‘Doesn’t he look…familiar?’

The girl squinted at him for a while, then her eyes widened. ‘The pig!’ she muttered, and stormed off. May laughed. She wasn’t sure exactly how sabotaging Darryl’s relationships was going to help her situation, but it had felt good.

‘Get off me!’ Amber snapped as Jay pulled her out of the meeting and into the corridor. As he let go of her she rubbed her arm. ‘There was no need to be so rough!’ she said.

‘What were you doing in there Amber?’ he asked. Some apology.

‘What do you mean?’ she said, confused. ‘I was trying to help set up a peaceful society! I thought we both were, but apparently the plan’s changed.’

‘This isn’t funny Amber!’

‘I’m not laughing here!’ she said. ‘I just don’t understand what I’ve done that you find offensive enough to drag me out here, in front of all the tribe leaders no less! It’s hardly going to do our standing any good if they think we’re divided.’

‘You told them you weren’t going to run for city leader!’ he said, ignoring most of her comments.

‘I didn’t want them to think we were trying to take over,’ she said. ‘You didn’t seriously expect me to stand did you?’

‘You have to!’ he pleaded. ‘The city won’t survive five minutes without you at the helm.’

‘What?!’ she spluttered. ‘No! We both agreed that you would look after the tribe while I spent more time with Bray.’

‘Yes, so you could concentrate on running the city once the next elections were held.’

‘We never talked about that!’

‘I thought it went without saying!’

‘No Jay!’ she said. ‘I’m not ready for this! If I can’t handle one tribe I’m not going to be able to deal with dozens of them!’

‘But I thought…’

‘Well you thought wrong!’

Jay opened his mouth, searching for words. ‘Please, Amber,’ he said finally. ‘You have to stand for city leader. We have to be able to supervise things, at least until everything gets back to normal. Especially with the Technicians hanging around.’

‘But you said yourself they weren’t interested in running the city,’ she sighed. Sometimes talking to Jay was like banging her head against a brick wall.

‘Then why are they here?’

‘They just want to have a say, like everyone else. They won’t put up a candidate.’

‘How do you know that?’ he asked. ‘I don’t trust them!’

‘Well if you’re so bothered about them why don’t you stand for leader? Why does it have to be me?’

‘If I thought I had any chance of winning then I would, but you’re the one that they trust.’

‘I can’t do it Jay,’ she said.

‘Please Amber!’ he repeated. ‘You know this won’t work without you, and you won’t have to do it on your own. I’ll help you, we all will!’

At that moment another pair of leaders came down from the mall, a man in a long coat with green-painted skin and a pale-skinned girl with long white hair and a skimpy black outfit. ‘Sorry we’re late!’ the girl giggled, eyeing up Jay before the pair of them went into the meeting.

‘Come on Amber,’ Jay said after they had gone. ‘You don’t want a tribe like the Skinks ruling the city do you?’ She closed her eyes and let out a heavy sigh. The most infuriating part was that he was right. She didn’t really trust any of the bigger tribes to be in charge of the city, but surely there was another way? ‘We have to go back in there soon,’ he said, hurrying her for an answer.

‘You have to promise me,’ she said slowly. ‘That if I agree to this, you’ll help me. I can’t do it alone.’

‘Of course,’ he said, smiling.

‘I mean it Jay,’ she said. ‘You can’t force me into this and then just leave it all to me.’

‘I promise,’ he said, more seriously this time.

‘Then I’ll do it,’ she said quietly.

‘Thank you,’ he replied. They shared a kiss then went back into the meeting. She felt as if she were walking to a trial. Her own trial.

Ruby smiled and shook her head as Darryl was accosted and promptly slapped by an irate partygoer. It was nice to know that his head injury hadn’t affected him in any way. Turning away she was surprised to see two figures dressed in Technician uniforms sitting alone in a corner. Seeing this as an opportunity to get more information on the mysterious new tribe she went over to talk to them.

‘Mind if I join you?’ she asked.

‘Erm, no, go ahead,’ one of them, a young woman with short blonde hair, said, sounding a little surprised. Her friend, a dark-haired man, looked suspicious.

‘You’re Technicians right?’ she asked.

‘Guilty as charged,’ the girl said. ‘Not many people recognise us yet, so I’d say you were a Mallrat, only you don’t look like a city girl.’

‘Right on both counts,’ Ruby said. ‘I came to the city with…a friend. I haven’t been here very long so you probably know the place better than I do!’

‘Oh I don’t know,’ the girl said. ‘We didn’t get out much when we were in the Technos did we Tag?’ The guy next to her grunted in agreement. ‘We thought we’d get more chances to get into the city when we left but Cable can be an even harder slave driver than Ram and Mega were, sometimes! I’m Link by the way,’ she said, offering her hand.

‘Nice to meet you Link. I’m Ruby.’

‘So Ruby, what drove you from the country?’ Link asked. ‘Usually when people move it’s the other way round.’

‘It wasn’t like that,’ she said. ‘I loved it out there. I ran a little saloon in a town called Liberty, ever since the Virus. I came here following a guy,’ she admitted. ‘Only he went and died on me.’

‘Bummer,’ Tag said.

Link gave him a funny look. ‘He must have been a great guy,’ she said.

Ruby laughed. ‘That’s not a word most people would have used, but then you can’t help who you fall for can you?’

‘No you can’t,’ Link agreed, sticking her tongue out at Tag.

‘This is going to be one of those girly talky things isn’t it?’ he asked. ‘I might go…mingle, or something.’

‘Is he always this sociable?’ Ruby asked when he had left.

Link laughed. ‘He’s alright once you get to know him,’ she said. ‘Now, where were we?’

Trudy smiled as Tobin told her again how beautiful she was. She couldn’t believe it, he was smart, funny, handsome - everything she could ever want. And he was still interested in her after half an hour of talking.

‘You’re not listening to a word I’m saying are you?’ he said, smiling.

‘Sorry!’ she laughed. ‘I’m not used to all this. Meeting someone, I mean. It’s all a little overwhelming!’

‘Yeah? Well what say we overwhelm you a little more?’ he said, kissing her.

‘What do you mean?’ she asked in between kisses.

‘How about we take this to your room?’ he whispered in her ear.

She stepped back, stopping the kisses. ‘Ah,’ she said. ‘We can’t do that.’

‘I’m sorry,’ he said. ‘I’m making you feel uncomfortable, aren’t I?’

‘No, it’s not that,’ she said. ‘It’s just that, well, my daughter’s sleeping upstairs.’

‘You…have a kid?’ It was said casually enough, but she could tell he was losing interest.

‘Her name’s Brady,’ she said. ‘She’s an angel, I think you’d like her.’

‘I…I have to…’

‘Don’t bother,’ she said with a sigh. ‘I’ve heard them all before. If you want to leave just leave.’

‘I’m sorry,’ he said quietly before moving away and into the crowd. She took a swig out of the nearest bottle. She had been sure he would understand! He seemed so…mature, but as usual she had been wrong. Feeling the tears welling up in her eyes she quickly headed upstairs and into her room. She laughed at herself for crying. It wasn’t like she needed a man in her life right now, but there did seem to be a growing feeling that she would never be able to find someone who wouldn’t run a mile when they found out she was a single mother.

Ellie was sitting reading to Jack when Ruby poked her head through the curtain.

‘Oh. Sorry,’ she said. ‘I’ll leave you alone.’

‘No, Ruby wait,’ Ellie said. ‘We’re just about done here anyway. How are you?’

‘Oh, not bad. Bit of a noisy neighbour problem at my place so I thought I’d pop in and see if you were still up.’

‘Ebony and Slade are still fighting then?’

‘No, they’re making up.’

‘Oh.’

‘Yeah.’

‘Okay,’ she said. ‘Moving swiftly on. How was the party?’

‘It could’ve been worse,’ Ruby said. ‘It’s winding down now, most people seem to be leaving. The leaders are still locked away downstairs though. They must have a lot to talk about.’

‘Yeah, I hope it’s going well.’ She gestured for Ruby to take a seat.

‘Thanks,’ the other girl said. ‘So, I was talking to a Technician earlier.’

‘They came to the party?’

‘Yup, there’s a couple of them at the meeting too, one of them being our friend Spinner.’

‘I bet Jay’s really pleased about that,’ she said sarcastically. ‘He’s had a bee in his bonnet ever since he got back from the power station.’

‘There’s definitely something odd about her,’ Ruby agreed. ‘Although Link says she’s always like that, you know, a bit aloof?’

‘Be careful with this Link, Ruby. I don’t trust any Technician, especially one who knows Spinner.’

‘You trusted her about Jack.’

‘That was different,’ she reasoned. ‘I didn’t know her then.’

‘You still don’t. Why don’t you come and meet Link for yourself? She’s alright.’

‘She’s still here?’

‘No, she went back to the power station, but she said she’d get in touch soon to arrange a night on the town. You could come with us.’

‘A girls’ night out with an ex-Techno? I don’t think so.’

‘Why not? It’ll be fun.’

She sighed. ‘I’ll think about it. You two really became friends didn’t you?’

Ruby shrugged. ‘Apparently being a Techno was a pretty lonely job, and it’s not like I know anyone in the city, apart from you lot of course. And the supplier I used for the saloon, but he’s not exactly someone I’d want to meet for coffee and cake.’ The two shared a laugh.

‘Well just be careful!’ Ellie said. ‘For all we know it could be the Technicians who’ve been bumping off the Technos, and if they did then they might have been responsible for what happened to you and Darryl today.’

‘But that was just some kid after a bit of food, surely?’ Ruby said, sounding shocked.

‘Maybe so, but it just seems like too big a coincidence to me, happening in exactly the same place as you found the bodies?’

‘Wow,’ Ruby breathed. ‘When you put it like that…’ Ellie stifled a yawn, which did not go unnoticed. ‘Sorry, I should go!’ Ruby said.

‘No it’s fine really. I just haven’t been getting much sleep lately.’

‘Have you and Jack been making any progress?’

‘Not really,’ she admitted. ‘Not at all in fact, but it’s bound to happen soon right?’

‘I hope so,’ Ruby said diplomatically. ‘I don’t really know how these things work.’

‘Me neither,’ she said.

‘Have you tried getting him out of bed? Walking him around a bit?’

‘No,’ she said. ‘Just the exercises Spinner showed me. He’s too heavy for me to do that by myself.’

‘You should have said something,’ Ruby said. ‘I’ll help you. If you want me to, that is.’

‘Really? Would you mind trying now?’

The two girls managed to lift Jack out of the bed and slowly began to drag him around the room. Ellie lost count of how many times they went round in circles. Finally though his weight became too much for them and they had to put him back to bed. The two girls collapsed on the floor and Ellie began to cry again.

‘I’m so sorry,’ Ruby said, putting a comforting arm around her friend. She was almost crying herself.

‘It’s not your fault,’ Ellie managed to say. ‘It just hurts to see him like this.’ She blew her nose on the tissue offered by Ruby. ‘Will you…will you help me try again tomorrow?’

The other girl nodded. ‘Of course I will.’

Ruby stayed until Ellie’s tears had stopped. Usually she didn’t like people seeing her cry, but she was glad Ruby had been there. She just hoped that her friend knew what she was doing, getting involved with Technicians.

Darryl hummed quietly to himself as he picked up the rubbish from the floor and put it into a bag. The tribal meeting was still taking place downstairs but it had gone on so long that even those people who had been waiting for their leaders to come out had long since gone. He was surprised, therefore, when he heard footsteps approaching, and even more surprised when he looked up to see May walking towards him. After last time, though, he decided it would be better to wait for her to speak before saying anything.

‘Darryl what are you doing?’ she asked him, rubbing her eyes. ‘Wouldn’t you rather be in bed?’ His cheeks coloured at the unintended suggestion but thankfully it was too dark for May to notice.

‘I just figured I’d make a start on the cleaning,’ he said. ‘It saves people doing everything tomorrow.’

‘Can I give you a hand then?’ She asked.

He shrugged. ‘If you like.’ She picked up a plastic bag and deftly began sorting through what could be reused and what couldn’t. It didn’t seem like she was about to bite his head off so he dared to start a conversation. ‘Um, May?’ he said tentatively.

‘Yeah?’

‘What did you say to the tall girl?’

‘Tall girl?’

‘Yeah, red hair, blue eyes. Wears carrots around her neck?’

‘Oh, her. I…didn’t say anything. Why would I?’

‘I saw you talking to her,’ he said. ‘You pointed at me, she got mad, then she came over and slapped me!’

‘And that’s my fault is it?’ she said, getting angry. ‘Maybe she just didn’t like you. Despite what you think you are not God’s gift to women.’

‘Hey wait, I think you’re getting the wrong end of the stick here!’ he protested. ‘I’m glad you said what you did, maybe now Crazy Vegetable Lady will leave me alone. She was kinda scary!’

‘Crazy Vegetable Lady?’

‘Sure, that’s what everybody calls her,’ he said. ‘Well, maybe not everybody. Mostly me. In fact only me, but she is!’

May laughed. ‘You are one strange guy, do you know that?’

‘Is that a good thing?’

‘I’m not sure yet,’ she said. ‘Listen, for what it’s worth I’m sorry I was so rude earlier. It wasn’t your fault, it was those Technicians, strutting about demanding I take them to the meeting. Who do they think they are?’

‘Yeah!’ he agreed. ‘Hey, are you ready for that dance yet?’

‘What dance?’

‘I asked you before if you wanted to dance and you said ‘not now’, but not now then is not not now now right?’

‘Pardon?’

‘You know. Not now now is not the not now not now was then, was it?’

She scratched her head. ‘I have no idea what you just said but if I dance with you will you stop talking?’

‘I think I can do that.’

‘Alright it’s a deal,’ she said. ‘Now shut up and stick some music on before I change my mind.’

He all but dived over to the CD player in his eagerness, pressing the button to play a random song. To his delight, it was a slow one.

‘We are not dancing to this!’ she proclaimed, marching over to the machine to switch songs. He quickly moved in between her and it to stop her.

‘No!’ he cried. ‘The CD player has chosen! It’s bad karma to go against its wishes!’

‘Are you serious?’

He nodded. ‘Ancient Chinese proverb.’ She gave him a murderous look.

‘Let’s just get this over with,’ she sighed, grabbing him and leading him to a clear space on the floor. ‘And don’t try any funny business!’ she warned him.

The dance started off a little awkwardly, but May soon gave in to the music. She was a great dancer, and he was sure she was enjoying herself. He even thought she looked a little disappointed when the music stopped and they pulled away from each other.

‘Fancy another?’ he chanced.

‘No,’ she said quickly, blushing slightly. ‘I should be going now. Don’t stay up too long cleaning.’ She turned her back on him and headed off to the room she shared with Salene. ‘And if you tell anybody about this,’ she called back. ‘I’ll break your kneecaps!’

He stood there grinning for a while after she had gone. ‘Oh yeah,’ he said to himself. ‘She wants me.’

‘Alright everyone,’ Jay said. ‘Close your eyes and throw your stones onto the floor, then we can all go home. Ready? Now!’ Amber heard the clattering of stones as they hit the ground and knew even before she opened her eyes what the outcome would be. Several different colours were present on the floor, but the white stones, her own colour, far outnumbered the others. It was done. She was city leader. ‘Congratulations, Amber,’ Jay said, smiling broadly, and the whole room - with a few exceptions - gave her a round of applause. The Skinks openly snarled at her, while the Technicians, although clapping, had unreadable expressions on their faces. She had no idea what they thought of her appointment. They had barely said a word all evening. Looking around she gave a weak smile and thanked everybody, but inside she felt numb. The trial had ended, and now she feared it was time for the execution.

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Damn to Jay! :angry: Pushing Amber like that… Tschaaa… Call that love… :angry:

POOR TRUDY! wanted to hug her and hit that Tobin! (cool name anyway!)

May… Really… She doesn’t even deserve Darryl swarming and fanning about her!

Poor Ellie, good that Ruby was there!

Question :why do only the Tribe leaders vote? Some tribes aren’t very democratic… So there are many voices unheard. Hopefully that doesn’t break Amber’s neck!

That red haired girl… She reminds on a mix of Alice and Luna Lovegood :rofl::rofl::rofl:

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Hmm, good question! I think in this case, because there is nobody in power after the defeat of the Technos, the city needs to get something set up as soon as possible. A full, city-wide election would take a lot of time to organise and then you have to go through the whole campaigning process, all the while nobody is really taking care of city business. So I think this is probably the next fairest option, having representatives from each tribe forming a council, who then elect a leader from among themselves, a bit like the UN or EU I suppose. It may be that this is just a temporary measure until the city gets back on its feet but we don’t really know what was discussed at the meeting.

And oh dear, if you don’t like Jay in this chapter you might want to mentally prepare yourself for the next one!

Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them. :slight_smile:

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