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Oh well… That’s true of course. In THE WORLD WE LIVE IN NOW I have a full vote of town… Costed me nerves to write :rofl: So ALL OF ME already has Amber as voted city council speaker… What literally means city leader.

OH well given that Jay has it in him to always somehow annoy me… That won’t be too bad. We can’t all like and love the same persons! (how do my best and me always say “Well we don’t have to kiss him!” :joy:) (okay in ALL OF ME I like him… But guess that because I also like Dylon so much :rofl:) But pushing Amber shows naturally his level headed personality. Not really caring for the emotional and psychological stress he puts his girl through, again working for the “greater good” But your story let’s me think he will get his sufferings too…

(I think I have to post sometime tomorrow for my week is full of medical appointments)

OH and forgot… The raffle… Is that a reference for the big party in s2? :wink:

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I wish I could say yes but S2 and S3 are the ones I’ve watched the least so I don’t remember a lot of what happens in them apart from the big stuff!

What really?! Shocking! I watched s4 the least… Only one time ever! (when it aired… And I was so annoyed that I almost didn’t watch s5 then… Today I gave watched s4 still only that one time, s5 three times…) I love rewatching the first three series… But just never wanted up with the whole Techno line and the new characters somehow. It was too much of a jump for me…
One day the Mall Rats were fighting to bring just some order to town and next day the Technos come up bringing energy and cyber games…

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The s2 party is that we’re is also the dancing contest… Bray and Danni become a couple in the afternath

S4 is the first one I saw from the beginning. I remember catching bits of S3 after something else I used to watch (can’t remember what that was now!) and was intrigued so when the new series started I decided to watch it.

I think S4 gets a bad rep for the reality space stuff but that doesn’t actually start until really late in the series. There’s still some really good ‘survival’ stuff in there like Lex getting an infection after his tooth is pulled out. And I was lucky in that I didn’t miss any of the old characters because I hadn’t really known them in the first place.

Oh, I really don’t remember that party… The only dance contest I remember is from the beach gathering in S1! I need to do a rewatch!

Wow… No I watched from the first episodes on. Switched through channels and caught the end credits (were Bray is standing on the roof) and was like “WTF?!” :joy: looked into the TV magazine and switched in next day… And stayed with it. I even had a friend in London who recorded it for me do that I could watch s4 and s5 before it aired in Germany. But they lost me then a little.

Chapter 23: What Mega Knew

Refreshed from her morning shower, Trudy came out of her room and surveyed the damage from the night before. As she suspected, it would take most of the morning to clean up the lower mall, though it wasn’t half as bad as she remembered. Deciding to take the opportunity while Brady was still asleep to grab a quick coffee she made her way to the café, where she was surprised to see people already up and about. Darryl was humming cheerfully by the coffee machine while Gel was sitting at one of the tables with her tongue shoved halfway down some random guy’s throat. It was exactly one week since the city had been in a panic over Mega’s virus but looking at the scene in front of her it was hard to believe that anything out of the ordinary had happened. Perhaps it hadn’t. Survival had become so much a part of daily life since the Virus that when things like this happened people were scared, yes, but they dealt with them and moved on.

‘Trudy!’ Darryl beamed as he turned away from the counter. ‘Coffee?’

‘Thanks,’ she smiled, gladly accepting the drink he gave her. ‘Who’s the guy?’

‘No idea,’ he grinned. ‘They don’t untangle themselves long enough for me to ask.’

‘Well they seem to be enjoying themselves anyway,’ she said.

‘Love’s young dream!’ Darryl sighed wistfully.

She narrowed her eyes. ‘Alright, something’s definitely up,’ she told him. ‘Nobody should be as happy as you are this early in the morning. It’s unnatural! Did you meet somebody too?’

‘All in good time, Trudy!’ he said, tapping his nose conspiratorially. ‘All in good time!’ Picking up another cup of coffee he left the café heading in the direction of his room with a definite spring in his step. As she watched him go she saw something move at the corner of her eye; it was Bonnie, peeking around a corner and apparently spying on Gel and her new boyfriend.

‘Oh, hi Trudy!’ Gel said suddenly. She sounded out of breath and was fanning herself with her hand. ‘How long have you been standing there?’

‘Long enough!’ she laughed. In the short time she was distracted Bonnie had disappeared. ‘So,’ she said, joining Gel and her man at the table. ‘Are you going to introduce us?’

‘Sure!’ Gel said happily. ‘Do you remember I told you about how I was kidnapped last week?’ Trudy nodded. ‘Well Creg here is the lovely man who came to my rescue! We met up last night at the party, isn’t that just so random? Creg, this is Trudy, my best friend in the mall.’

‘Nice to meet you Trudy,’ Creg said, finally managing to get a word in.

‘And you, Creg,’ she replied. ‘What tribe are you with?’

‘Oh he’s not part of a tribe,’ Gel explained. ‘They disappeared after the Technos invaded, just like mine. Aren’t we just so perfect for each other?’ She smiled at him, clearly besotted, and he smiled back.

‘What were they called?’ Trudy asked.

Creg paused for a moment before answering. ‘We called ourselves the Circle,’ he said. ‘I haven’t seen any of them since the Technos arrived.’ The name meant nothing to Trudy, although it reminded her of some sort of creepy brotherhood, like the Chosen.

‘He can stay here can’t he Trudy?’ Gel asked. ‘Join the Mallrats?’

‘Who’s joining the Mallrats?’ Lex asked, suddenly appearing in the café. ‘Nobody joins this tribe without my say so, got that? Who are you anyway?’ he said, addressing Creg.

‘His name’s Creg, Lex, and he’s my boyfriend if you must know,’ Gel answered for him. ‘Creg, you don’t want to hang around with Lex, he’s a bad influence.’

‘I was talking to pretty boy,’ Lex said. ‘Or doesn’t he speak? Are you dumb? I guess you must be to fall for Gel, but then you’re not after her brains are you?’

Creg looked angry at Lex’s attack on his girlfriend but Gel butted in before he could reply. ‘Unlike some people Lex, Creg isn’t only after one thing. In fact he was the perfect gentleman last night; he slept on the couch.’

Lex laughed out loud at this new piece of information. ‘Now I know there’s something wrong with him,’ he said. ‘Why are you really here?’ he asked, banging his fists on the table and leaning menacingly over the other man. ‘Are you spying on us for your tribe? Is that it?’

‘I don’t have to listen to this!’ Creg yelled, standing up suddenly and causing his chair to scrape violently on the floor. ‘Sorry Gel but I’m leaving.’

‘Hit a raw nerve did I?’ Lex smirked as Creg walked away.

‘Lex!’ Gel shouted, giving him a slap that only made him laugh. ‘Creg! You’ll be here tonight won’t you?’ The poor girl sounded distraught.

‘Just you try and stop me!’ he replied, although Trudy wasn’t quite sure whether this was aimed at Gel, Lex or both.

‘Wimp,’ Lex muttered as the other man left.

‘Why couldn’t you just be happy for her Lex?’ Trudy said reprovingly. ‘At least somebody was lucky in love last night. One mention of Brady and the guys couldn’t get away from me fast enough.’

‘Well what do you expect?’ he said as if she were stupid. ‘No man wants to be lumbered with another guy’s kid.’

‘He does have a point,’ Gel grudgingly admitted. ‘You need to go on a few dates first, make sure they’ve fallen for you, and then tell them about Brady.’

‘I can’t believe you two!’ she exclaimed. ‘No, actually this is exactly what I would expect from you Lex, but I thought you would be a little more sympathetic Gel! Brady is not a part of my life that I’m ashamed of! I’m not going to hide her away like some dark secret! I love my daughter and if a guy doesn’t accept that we come together then he’s just not somebody I want to be with, end of story.’ Angry with the pair of them she got up and stormed away from the table.

‘Hey! Where are you going?’ Lex called after her.

‘I’m going to my room if that’s alright with you!’ she snapped back.

‘Well, no, it isn’t actually,’ he said. ‘I’m calling a meeting. Five minutes, by the fountain.’

She rolled her eyes. ‘Can’t it wait?’ she asked acidly.

‘No,’ he said simply. ‘It’s important. I need everybody to be there.’

‘Fine, then I’m bringing Brady, since she’s a member of this tribe too!’

‘You can bring the rats for all I care,’ he replied. ‘Just make sure you’re down there in five minutes. You too Gel.’

Gel sighed and stretched her hands out in front of her, apparently contemplating whether or not she had time to do her nails beforehand. Trudy went to her room to fetch Brady. She didn’t like taking orders from Lex but she knew that he wouldn’t call a meeting unless it really was important.

It was more than an hour before everyone was finally assembled in the mall’s central courtyard. It was still early and most people had been sleeping off the night before, but that was no excuse! If they knew why he had called this meeting in the first place they would have all been down in a flash! The last to arrive were Jay and Amber, with Bray, who came and stood next to Trudy and Gel, with Brady and Bonnie, at the bottom of the stairs. Gel was blowing on her nails. A little further along were Ellie, Ruby, Lottie and Sammy, while Ebony and Slade stood on the stairs, away from everyone else. Salene, May and Darryl were by the fountain, closest to Lex.

‘Can we get on with this now?’ Ebony asked, looking bored.

‘Yeah, come on Lex,’ Ellie agreed. ‘I should be helping Jack with his exercises.’

‘Well if you lot hadn’t been so lazy we could have been finished by now!’ he said.

‘You know you really didn’t need to call this meeting Lex,’ Jay said. ‘We were going to tell people what happened last night once everyone had recovered from the party.’

‘Yes, what happened at the meeting?’ Salene asked. ‘Did the tribes agree to work together?’

‘Better than that,’ Jay answered. ‘We’ve already formed a tribal council and appointed a new city leader.’

‘Really? Who is it?’ Trudy asked.

Jay nudged Amber and grinned. ‘It’s me,’ she said quietly and the room erupted into celebration with people wanting to congratulate her. Lex was not amused; his meeting had been hijacked before it had even begun! Bending down, he picked up a saucepan he had brought along for just such an occasion and started to bang it with a spoon. Everybody turned to look at him.

‘You can all smother Amber some other time,’ he said. ‘This isn’t why I called a meeting.’

‘Why did you call the meeting then?’ Lottie asked.

‘I was getting to that,’ he said through his teeth.

‘Oh, this had better be good,’ Ebony moaned.

‘It will be if you all stop interrupting!’ he snapped. When he was convinced that he had everybody’s full attention he continued. ‘I know where our missing friends are,’ he said proudly. Groans of disbelief drifted from the assembled Mallrats. ‘What? Don’t you think I’m smart enough to find out?’ he asked.

‘That pretty much sums it up,’ May smirked.

‘It’s true! It was Mega himself who told me!’

That didn’t go down well either. Ebony openly laughed. ‘And why would Mega tell you where they were?’ she asked.

‘In exchange for his freedom of course.’

‘So it was you who let him escape!’ she said. ‘I knew it!’ Suddenly everyone was turning against him.

‘How could you Lex?’

‘…can’t believe you would be so stupid!’

‘…trust Mega of all people!’

He banged his saucepan again. ‘I can’t believe you people!’ he said once the clamour had died down. ‘Don’t you want to find the rest of our tribe? Tai San? Cloe? Alice? What about Bray?’

‘Bray’s dead Lex!’ Amber fumed. ‘I saw the files myself. It said he’d been deleted.’

‘That’s not the same!’ he argued. ‘Look, I was talking to an ex-Techno, goes by the name of Fish. He said he was in charge of transporting prisoners, and that ‘deleted’ just means they were shipped out.’

‘Shipped out where?’ Salene asked.

He dug out a piece of paper from his pocket and unfolded it. ‘Here,’ he said. ‘Mega drew me a map. All the prisoners who were taken from the city ended up on this island.’ Finally people were starting to take him seriously!

‘What did he look like?’ Jay asked thoughtfully.

‘Who?’

‘This ‘Fish’ guy. What did he look like?’

‘Tall, slim, short dark hair.’

‘That doesn’t narrow it down much!’

‘Hold on! I’m thinking! He had some sort of scar just above his eyebrow.’

‘Sounds like Flash,’ Jay said. He was responsible for transportation.’

‘Thank you! Now do you all believe me?’

‘Ved,’ Jay whispered.

‘Yes, Ved, Bray, they could all still be alive!’ Suddenly black flecks appeared in front of his eyes. It took him a moment to realise that Amber had slapped him. That was twice so far today and it wasn’t even lunchtime. He could be in for a new record. ‘What was that for?’ he asked.

‘Because you knew all this and you said nothing!’

‘I wanted to wait until everything was ready!’

‘So you could get all the glory you mean. I’m the mother of his child! I have a right to know!’

‘Wait,’ May said. ‘What do you mean ready?’

‘You know, supplies and stuff. If we can organise a group now we could leave first thing in the morning.’ Excited murmurs came from the rest of the tribe.

‘And how exactly do you plan to get there?’

‘The same way we were going to leave the city. Your friend with the boat.’

There was a sudden silence. ‘I don’t think he’s going to want to take us anywhere soon,’ Ellie said.

‘What did you guys do?’ he asked. Nobody answered. ‘Well thanks for messing up my plan guys!’

‘It could still work,’ May said slowly. ‘He might still take you, but not me or Darryl. He’ll want payment upfront though, and it won’t be cheap.’

‘But we don’t have anything to trade!’ Salene said sadly. ‘Why are you grinning Lex? It’s not funny!’

‘Come on,’ he said. ‘You didn’t think I was going to let all those presents go to waste did you?’

‘You fixed the raffle?’ Amber said, sounding appalled.

‘But I was watching the whole time!’ May said. ‘You gave everything away!’

‘Which is exactly how it was supposed to look,’ he bragged. They didn’t need to know about the deal he had made with the Skinks, trading winning tickets for half the prizes they got. The muttering grew louder, with everyone condemning his little scam. What was with them? It wasn’t like he’d robbed an orphanage or anything. It was their stuff in the first place! ‘Hey!’ he shouted. ‘HEY!’ He banged the saucepan again until everyone was listening. ‘Bigger picture here people! Do you want to get our friends back or not?’ Nobody spoke. ‘Good! Now who’s coming with me?’ May and Darryl were already out, and Amber had to stay to run the city, but Ebony quickly volunteered, dragging Slade along with her despite his reluctance. He was also slightly surprised to see Salene raise her hand.

‘I want to come,’ she said. ‘Maybe Ryan’s out there somewhere.’ Lex nodded. He missed Ryan too.

‘And me!’ Sammy cried. ‘I want to go too!’

Lex snorted. ‘Forget it kid.’

‘I’m not a kid! I can do this!’

‘Just drop it!’ Ebony said. ‘We don’t want to have to be keeping an eye on you all the time. You’re not coming and that’s that.’ Ruby tried to put an arm around Sammy but he just shrugged it off. Did the kid really believe that they were going to let him tag along?

He looked at Jay. ‘We’re going to need you there with us, Jay,’ he said. ‘We don’t know what we’re going to find on this island, and you know the Technos better than any of us.’

‘He can’t go,’ Amber said.

‘Amber,’ Jay pleaded. ‘This could be my only chance to find Ved! And don’t you want to know if Bray’s out there too?’

‘That is not the point, Jay!’ she said. ‘You promised!’

‘I know, and I’ll be there for you, just as soon as I get back.’ Amber gave him a disgusted look and stormed off to her room. ‘This had better be worth it Lex,’ he said.

‘Of course it will,’ he replied. ‘You’ll see. We’ll have everyone back again in no time.’ It was really happening, and soon he would have Tai San back in his arms where she belonged. He’d had her once and let her slip away again, but he wasn’t about to make the same mistake twice.

‘Amber, can’t we talk about this?’

‘No Jay, we can’t,’ she said, grabbing his clothes and a pair of boots from the wardrobe and throwing them out of the room. How could he do this to her? ‘The only reason you managed to talk me into this was because you promised we could do it together, but the first opportunity you have you go swanning off on a wild goose chase with Lex of all people!’

‘It’s not like that!’ he said, ducking to avoid a flying shaving kit. He winced as something cracked when it hit the floor. ‘These are exceptional circumstances! If there are still Technos on that island then I could make all the difference. You still have the rest of the tribe here to support you. I thought you’d be happy that Bray might be alive.’

‘Bray is dead, Jay! Now get out!’

He stood silent for a few seconds then turned and walked away. Lying down on her bed she closed her eyes and repeated those three words over and over in her head. ‘Bray is dead. Bray is dead. Bray is dead.’

Ebony took a deep breath before steeling herself and marching into Ruby’s room. The other girl was lying on her bed reading a book while Lottie was sitting playing on the floor. Ebony gave the little girl a sharp look and she quickly took the hint and hurried out of the room.

‘Don’t you knock?’ Ruby asked tartly.

‘And ruin the element of surprise?’

‘What do you want Ebony?’

‘Look don’t make this harder than it already is okay?’ she said, fiddling nervously with her hands.

‘Make what harder? What are you talking about?’

‘I know you remember what happened that day. With the truck.’ She took another deep breath; it was now or never. ‘I just wanted to tell you that…I’m sorry.’

‘Sorry?’ Ruby laughed. ‘Would you still be saying that if I had been pregnant?’

‘Look I said I’m sorry! It’s up to you whether you accept it or not. It’s no skin off my back if you don’t because quite frankly I have no intention of being your friend. I’ve said what I came here to say.’

She turned to leave but Ruby wasn’t finished. ‘Did Slade put you up to this?’ she asked.

‘Slade has no idea what happened and if you tell him you’ll regret it!’

‘Poor Ebony,’ Ruby mocked. ‘Are you scared that he’ll leave you and come back to me? That’s why you’re so keen on going to this island isn’t it? You don’t care about any missing Mallrats, you just want to get him as far away from me as possible!’

Deciding she had heard enough she walked away from Ruby’s room, her face contorted in rage. ‘Bon voyage, Ebony!’ Ruby called after her.

That evening Lottie went to Gel’s room as usual to find Bonnie. Her friend was sitting on her bed looking rather sullen, although she brightened up a little when she saw Lottie. The girl had been in a sulk the whole day, apparently because Gel was now paying more attention to her boyfriend than to her. Gel herself was sitting at her dressing table, getting ready for her date.

‘Hi Lottie,’ she said, catching sight of her in the mirror. ‘Is it alright if Bonnie stays with you and Ruby tonight?’

‘Sure,’ she replied. ‘You look really nice Gel,’ she added.

‘Thank you Lottie, that is so sweet!’ Flattery would get you everywhere with Gel.

‘Actually,’ she said. ‘Bonnie and I were thinking that maybe we could move in with Sammy.’ She looked over to Bonnie, who was biting her lip anxiously, and gave her a reassuring nod.

‘Really?’ Gel asked, turning away from the mirror to look at them. She looked a little upset.

‘Yeah,’ Bonnie said. ‘We spend nearly all our time together anyway, and you and Ruby deserve a little space.’

‘Well, if that’s what you want.’

‘It is!’ Bonnie said.

‘Then I guess it’s fine by me. I’m going to miss you though. I mean, I know you’ll only be down the hall but it’ll be strange with you not here.’

‘I’ll visit,’ she said, then a little more quietly ‘When he’s not here.’

Lottie looked on as the two girls hugged and then started to head out with Bonnie. Before they got to the door, however, she thought of another question. ‘Gel?’

‘Mm?’ the older girl mumbled as she put her lipstick on.

‘Have you seen Sammy recently?’

‘Not since the meeting. He’s probably still sulking somewhere if you ask me.’

‘Alright then. Bye!’

Bonnie stopped her as soon as they left the room. ‘Has Sammy disappeared?’ she asked.

Lottie nodded. ‘He has. And I think he might have done something stupid.’

Sammy rubbed his hands together as he walked along the seafront. It was a chilly night and his breath was misting up in front of him. Not for the first time he wished he was back at the mall, but he had to show them that he could do this. That he was a man. As he approached the docks he saw the trader’s boat at the end of the quay. A light inside the fisherman’s hut told him the trader was home. He would have to be careful sneaking onto the boat. He was paying so much attention to the hut that he didn’t notice the feral cat crossing his path until it was too late. He stepped on its tail and it miaowed noisily. Startled, he fell into a stack of crates which toppled over with a loud crash. He just had time to duck down behind the remaining boxes before the door to the hut burst open and the trader staggered out clutching a bottle.

‘Who’s there?’ the man shouted. When nobody answered he came forward and approached the crates. Sammy could smell the alcohol on his breath and held his own so as not to be detected, and to block out the smell. Thankfully he was rescued by the reappearance of the cat; it jumped up on top of the crates and started hissing at the trader. ‘Cooking fats!’ he slurred. ‘Stop disturbing my rest or next time I’ll skin you, and eat you!’ The cat took no notice so the man went back inside and slammed the door. A soft thud immediately afterwards indicated that he had collapsed in a drunken stupor, so Sammy took his chance and ran the rest of the way to the boat, climbing on board and hiding underneath a pile of blankets where he lay shivering for the rest of the night.

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OMG! And here was me thinking you would work without some people returning! Now I am curious!

Lex… That guy… I wanted to slap him too on the other hand I cheered him! Well done!

I can see Amber being really distressed, Jay was maybe a tad bit insensitive… After all he is the dx general who brought the invasion and the thought of Bray being alive and finding her with “the enemy” huhuuuu…

Creg confuses me! Has he hit something to do with that attacker? Is he a hidden Chosen? Hmhmhm…

Hopefully
Sammy won’t get into trouble there!

This chapter definitively makes curious!

(I posted too today)

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I was so excited to post this chapter! Thanks for sticking with it this far! It’s a real turning point in terms of the story and splitting some characters up/throwing others together, so there’ll be lots of opportunities for new interactions between the Mallrats and for characters to shine in different ways.

To be fair to Jay, he didn’t really have any good choices here.

And Lex is always more insufferable when he’s right about something!

Also Trudy is jumping to conclusions a bit here about Creg’s tribe, based on her own experiences. If he really had been part of a cult he probably wouldn’t have admitted it to people he only just met.

Good luck with your internet improvements!

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Indeed… It gives a chance on complete new relations between several persons (also meant in the normal friendships)

Of course in the end Jay had no real choice, hopefully Amber will be strong enough to do it alone. She was only on the way to recover a bit.

True Trudy makes biased conclusions, but it sounded like he didn’t want to tell his tribes name…Well just gave to wait :grin:

(thanks… Luckily I have a good deal of data volume on my phone for I need the net to research stuff often.)

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Let the reading commence…

Chapter 11; Reunited: I remember Jay had a nice smile. starts to daydream of the blonde whore
Trudy getting hysteric as she does. :slight_smile: Glad to see the back of the boat owner! Best bit in this chapter was Gel telling them all about her ‘knight in shining armour’. :stuck_out_tongue: And I liked Trudy’s line that closed that scene. :slight_smile: I liked Ellie in the show and still loving her here. :slight_smile: I’m happy the cafe is back upstairs, how did that happen? LOL, magic. ‘Eww, what’s that?’ another scene steal from Gel again and I was smiling ear to ear when Bonnie and Gel interacted. Stroppy Amber at her finest and now she has gone, I understand why but she reacted like this so much in the show it bugged me, she is quite selfish! I had forgotten Lottie was stuck in Narnia.

Chapter 12; An Unwelcome Surprise: Oh Amber didn’t get far! HAHA. Aw that was a perfect opportunity for Jay to sleep in bed with Darryl instead of his couch. :slight_smile: Happy Gel has a friend in Bonnie and I enjoyed the scene where Jay mistook Bonnie for Mouse. :slight_smile: My blood is boiling at Amber’s rudeness. :angry: But I am hopeful this is the end for Jay and Amber as they just weren’t right for each other, he should of stayed with Trudy. Enjoyed the scene with the boys, what an ending!!! :slight_smile:

Chapter 13; The Cable Guy:* This was an interesting chapter and I am excited to see where this could go and the introduction of new characters. I had randomly read this chapter when you posted it. Fingers crossed Spinner and co will do good this time and surely not another woman waiting in the wings for Jay. Whatever the outcome of these 4 Techno’s will be I know it will be epic. The more I read of this I am just blow away, you are a very good writer!

Chapter 14; Burying The Past: I quite enjoyed the relationship Lex and Ram formed in S5, I was surprised to read Lex’s reaction not wanting to attend a ceremony. Both Lex and Jay should attend just for Slade’s sake. Oooo Jay had a thing with Spinner in the past, they are definitely gonna hook up again! God Lex is so irritating! And again another scene with Gel is my highlight, this was just perfect and I was laughing along. Gel and Trudy make quite a team. The ending was hilarious.

Chapter 15; Diagnosis Murder: You probably know exactly what the next sentence will say, Gel squealing cracked me again and the visual came to life. Aw Trudy is so lovely comforting Ellie. I am enjoying the lack of Amber. :slight_smile: Shame there is not less Lex. Spinner seems to know what she is talking about, I am so worried for Jack. I say it again, I am really enjoying Ellie and prefer seeing other characters being focused on rather than Amber. :slight_smile: OMG what another great ending.

Gosh I want to read more but I am going to leave it there for today. :slight_smile: Keep the dream alive @MallRatMatt

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Absolutely! Definitely including all types of relationship in my earlier comment!

@Jack - thanks once again for your comments.

I knew someone would spot that I’d put the café in the wrong place! I don’t think I really had a handle on where anything was in the mall at the time of writing! And yes, had to remember to free Lottie, haha!

I’m now imagining Jay and Darryl in some Odd Couple-esque sitcom. Someone needs to write that fic! And absolutely agree that Jay should have stayed with Trudy.

Ah, thanks for the compliment! I hope you continue to enjoy the new characters. :slight_smile:

Yeah, I’ve been called out on characters’ attitudes to the memorial before, and it’s a fair point. I’ve talked about this in earlier comments but I think also in my head there was a distinction between giving him a respectful burial (this chapter) and actively celebrating his life (at the memorial). I take your point about going for Slade’s sake though.

Glad you are liking the mix of characters. That’s definitely something I try to pay special attention to as I think that’s what really made The Tribe in the early days. So I try to make sure that everyone has their slice of the action.

Again, thanks so much!

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Chapter 24: Beginnings

The water glittered as the sun began to rise over it, illuminating the group of people at the docks. Trudy stifled a yawn as she surveyed her companions, all here to wave off the search party they were sending to the island, and to help carry down the items Lex was going to use to pay the trader for the voyage. That was part of the reason why they were here so early - Lex didn’t want anyone else seeing his love nest, where he had stored everything. She watched as he stood over the goods with the trader, occasionally pointing something out as being of special value. She couldn’t hear what the pair were saying but the trader certainly seemed to be shaking his head a lot. She looked around to see what the rest of the tribe were up to. Not everyone was here of course; May and Darryl had stayed behind after what happened last time they had used this boat, and Ellie had decided to stay with Jack. Sammy was nowhere to be found when they had left, and Amber hadn’t shown up yet either.

‘I’m sure she’ll be here soon,’ she told Jay, who was standing next to her.

‘Forget it Trudy,’ he sighed. ‘She’s not coming.’

‘Did she tell you that?’ she asked.

‘She didn’t have to,’ he replied. ‘She kicked me out of our room yesterday after the meeting. I spent last night renewing my relationship with Darryl’s couch.’

‘Oh, I’m sorry Jay, I didn’t realise,’ she said.

‘It’s my fault,’ he sighed. ‘I promised her I would stay and help her run the city. It’s the only reason she agreed to do it in the first place.’

‘I’m sure she’ll understand,’ she said. ‘In time. Once you come back with everyone.’

Jay laughed. ‘You really believe what Lex said, don’t you?’ Oh, don’t get me wrong, I hope he’s right, I honestly do, but Amber’s right in not getting her hopes up. If the prisoners ever were on that island there’s no guarantee they still will be, especially now the Technos no longer control the city.’

‘I trust your judgement Jay. You thought that Fish was the right person, and that’s good enough for me.’ She clasped his hands in her own. ‘And don’t worry about Amber. We’ll make sure she’s ok.’

‘Thanks Trudy,’ he said, hugging her, then added ‘I never deserved you.’

Feeling slightly uncomfortable, she mumbled something sympathetic and stepped out of the embrace. All she wanted to do was forget about their relationship! Why did he have to bring it up again?

‘The scumbag wants the lot!’ Lex fumed, coming over to them. ‘Otherwise he won’t bring us back. He says it’s for loss of trade and the extra passengers on the return journey. Can you believe this guy?’

‘What did you expect?’ Ebony asked as she and Slade joined the conversation. ‘You brought everything you had here with us. He was hardly going to settle for part of it, was he?’ She shook her head as if she couldn’t believe how stupid Lex had been.

‘Maybe if you’d told us all sooner we could have negotiated a price with him beforehand,’ Slade added. Lex just scowled and walked off.

The trader gave orders to his associate, Arto, to lock his payment away in the hut then called for everyone who was leaving to get onboard the boat, although in a less polite fashion.

‘Well I guess this is goodbye Trudy,’ Jay said, slinging his pack over his shoulder. ‘Take care of her for me. You never know, maybe the time apart will be good for us.’ He looked hopeful, but not entirely convinced.

‘Goodbye Jay,’ she said. ‘And good luck. I hope you find Ved.’ He smiled gratefully. ‘Oh,’ she added. ‘And make sure Lex and Ebony don’t kill each other.’

‘I’ll try. I can tell this journey is just going to be heaps of fun!’ As Jay took his place on the boat, she went to stand by Ruby and the kids, who were saying goodbye to Salene. Brady saw her approaching and ran to her excitedly.

‘Mommy!’

‘Hi darling!’ she replied, lifting Brady into her arms. ‘It’s time for Salene to go now kids. Have you all said goodbye?’ She was answered by a trio of nodding heads.

‘Take care Salene,’ Ruby said, hugging the other girl. ‘We’ll miss you.’

‘Good luck, Sal,’ Trudy added.

‘You look after your Mommy for me,’ Salene said, addressing Brady. ‘I’ll see you soon, okay?’ she told the two older girls.

‘Here, take this!’ Lottie chimed, opening her backpack to reveal a sleeping bag. ‘It might come in handy.’

Salene smiled. ‘Thank you Lottie, but we’ve got sleeping bags already, and we don’t want to take more than we can carry.’

‘But it’s just one sleeping bag!’ Bonnie argued. ‘And you’ll need it for…’

‘For if it gets really cold,’ Lottie interrupted.

‘That’s very kind of you,’ Salene laughed. ‘But you keep it okay? It can get pretty cold in the mall too!’ Lottie and Bonnie looked at each other, sighed and walked away, while Trudy shared a bemused look with Ruby and Salene. ‘Well, I’d better be going,’ Salene said. ‘Take care of yourselves.’ She readjusted the strap of her bag on her shoulder and walked off to join the others on the boat.

‘Wait!’

Trudy turned around, hoping to see Amber, but that shrill cry could only have come from Gel. She had been standing further back with Creg but now she ran towards the boat, hopping aboard daintily and throwing her arms around Lex. ‘Lex you’re a pig and I hate you but be safe!’ she said in one big rush.

‘Yeah,’ he replied, a little taken aback. ‘You too.’

Looking decidedly embarrassed, Gel returned to Creg’s side and clung to his arm. Trudy smiled in amusement. ‘That’s enough!’ the trader spat. ‘If you wanted a farewell party you should have had one back at the mall. I’ll take you to this island of yours, but I’m the one in charge here and we leave now!’

‘Then cast off already!’ Ebony glared from the boat. The trader was clearly affronted by this comment but was too scared of her to say anything about it. Instead he quietly untied the boat from its mooring and jumped aboard to start the engine. The boat moved off and Trudy and the rest of the group at the dock waved goodbye to their friends until it was a good distance from land and everyone had gone into the cabin. Trudy continued watching until it disappeared from sight altogether. Suddenly feeling the cold she shivered and turned to the others.

‘We’d better get back to the mall,’ she said.

Gel and Creg led the way, and Trudy fell in with Ruby behind them, with Brady walking alongside. Lottie and Bonnie kept their distance at the back, exchanging angry whispers.

‘Those two are up to something,’ Ruby pronounced. ‘And it sounds like trouble.’

‘I’m sure it’s nothing,’ Trudy laughed. ‘They’re probably just blaming each other for not being forceful enough with Salene over the sleeping bag.’

‘Hmm.’ Ruby sounded unconvinced.

‘They’d have been better off trying to give her blankets or food if you ask me,’ she continued. ‘I mean, a sleeping bag seems a bit of a strange choice don’t you think? Ruby?’ It took her a moment to realise that Ruby had stopped, turning around to face the two girls with her hands on her hips.

‘Alright you two,’ she said firmly. ‘I’m going to ask you a question and you’re going to tell me the truth, got it?’ The girls nodded in unison, smiling sweetly. ‘Good. Where’s Sammy?’ The smiles immediately faded and the pair exchanged worried glances. Trudy gasped as she realised what Ruby had already figured out. Sammy was on the boat.

Through the dirty window, Slade could just about make out the coastline going by as the boat continued its journey to Lex’s mystery island. There was nothing particularly interesting to see out there, so he turned his head to survey the cabin. Most of the space was taken up by the group’s provisions. The floor was littered with piles of blankets, sleeping bags and rucksacks of various sizes. Opposite him Salene sat sleeping with her head on Jay’s shoulder. Jay himself seemed deep in thought, a troubled look on his face, whether about Amber, his brother, or something else Slade couldn’t tell. Lex and Ebony were in the bow with the trader.

Needing some fresh air he left the cabin and went to stand out on the deck. Steadying himself on the railings he closed his eyes and let the cool spray hit his face. He laughed. How had he ended up here? Just a few months ago he had been roaming the countryside, searching for his brother. Now Josh was dead, his bike was rusting in Liberty if it hadn’t already been stolen, and he was stuck on this boat, looking for people he didn’t even know, and all because Ebony didn’t trust him not to leave her for Ruby.

‘Slade?’ Ebony came out onto the deck and stood beside him. ‘Is everything alright?’

‘I would have come with you, you know.’

‘What do you mean?’ she asked.

‘If you really wanted to find the rest of the Mallrats, I would have volunteered too. You didn’t give me the choice.’ Ebony turned her head away from him, unable to say anything. ‘You don’t have to be jealous of Ruby.’

She whipped her head back around to face him. ‘Yeah, well can you blame me? After everything that’s happened? How am I supposed to compete with her ?’

‘You don’t have to compete,’ he told her. ‘In case you hadn’t noticed, you’re the one I’m with, not Ruby.’ He didn’t think he would ever understand women, especially ones like Ebony. Perhaps that was part of the reason why he loved her.

She put her arms around him and buried her head in his chest. ‘I’m sorry,’ she said. ‘You’re wrong, though,’ she added after a while. ‘About the Mallrats.’

‘In what way?’

‘Alright so you’re not completely wrong,’ she explained. ‘It’s no secret that most of them I couldn’t care less about, but I do miss some of them. Very much so. I wouldn’t have come all this way just to avoid Ruby.’ She looked at him and he knew she was telling the truth. Letting go of him, she went back inside and he paused for a while before following her. Inside the cabin Salene had woken up, but the mood was still subdued. With a sigh he fell into one of the piles of blankets, and was surprised when they let out a grunt and a figure rolled out from underneath him.

‘Sammy?!’ Salene cried.

‘What are you doing here?’ Ebony shouted. ‘You were told to stay at the mall!’

‘I’m more use here!’ Sammy argued. ‘I’m not a kid anymore. You had no right to leave me behind!’ Ebony looked at the younger Mallrat like he was something unpleasant she wanted to scrape off her boot.

Suddenly the door to the bow swung open and Lex marched out. ‘What’s all the yelling about?’ he demanded, then saw Sammy. ‘How did you get on here?’

‘Nobody gets a free voyage on my boat!’ the trader’s voice boomed from the bow. ‘If there’s a stowaway on board you either pay passage or we’re going straight back where we came from.’

‘But we gave you everything we’ve got!’ Lex complained.

‘Not my problem!’ The trader said gleefully. ‘We agreed five passengers to the island and you’ve got six, so if you don’t want to cut your little vacation short then I suggest you get rid of someone sharpish. I’m a fair man, I don’t mind who goes.’

‘With pleasure,’ Lex snarled at Sammy, whose eyes widened in fear.

‘This is ridiculous!’ Salene said indignantly, standing up. ‘Lex, don’t you dare!’

‘Why not, Sal?’ Give me one good reason! I’m not giving up on Tai San because of one stupid kid!’

Salene gave Lex a disgusted look and barged past him to talk to the trader. ‘You’re right that we only agreed to bring five people, but we also agreed on an unlimited number to take back to the city. We don’t even know if we’re going to find our friends once we get there so don’t act like you’re getting a raw deal! We’ve paid for Sammy’s passage a dozen times over already, so just keep moving!’ The trader muttered something inaudible to Slade, but Salene seemed appeased and came back out into the cabin. ‘Get back in there with him Lex,’ she demanded. ‘Before I decide to throw you overboard.’ Lex angrily obeyed, and Salene went out onto the deck to cool off. Sammy sat down on the bench, trying to avoid the stares Ebony was giving him and looking like he wished he was back at the mall. Slade sat down next to Jay.

‘I hope this journey doesn’t take too long,’ he said. Jay just nodded in agreement.

By the time they reached the mall, Ruby had managed to find out from Bonnie and Lottie that they didn’t know for sure that Sammy was on the boat, but she would bet her saloon that he was. She blamed herself for not realising it sooner.

‘Should we go tell Amber about Sammy?’ Lottie asked.

‘I think I’d better do that,’ Trudy told her, then whispered to Ruby ‘I’m not sure what kind of mood she’ll be in.’ She walked off with Brady in the direction of Amber’s room, while Ruby left the girls to go and see Ellie. As she reached the top of the stairs she saw May in her room, busy writing.

‘Hi May!’ she said, but the other girl was too preoccupied to notice. She crumpled the piece of paper she was writing on into a ball and began again on a fresh sheet. Ruby shook her head and carried on walking.

‘Hi Ruby!’ Ellie said as she entered the room. ‘How did it go at the docks?’

‘The guy drove a hard bargain, but agreed to take them to the island. It looks like they’re in for a bit of a surprise though. It seems Sammy stowed away on the boat last night. I managed to get it out of the girls but by then it was too late.

‘Really? He was pretty upset about not being allowed to go but I didn’t think he would do something like that. Oh dear, Lex and Ebony won’t be pleased.’

‘Exactly. Salene and Jay will look after him though.’

‘What about Slade?’

Ruby laughed. ‘Who knows where Slade’s concerned? He seems to be wrapped around Ebony’s little finger these days.’

‘I wouldn’t be so sure,’ Ellie mused. ‘I think he’s smarter than that.’

‘If you say so.’

She was glad when Ellie changed the subject. ‘Isn’t it great that all the people who went missing from the city could still be alive?’ she said, smiling.

‘Definitely,’ Ruby agreed. ‘Wasn’t your sister taken by the Technos?’

‘Alice,’ Ellie nodded, a little sadly. ‘If anyone survived it’ll be her. I miss her so much. She didn’t even want to stay in the city. It’s my fault she was here in the first place.’

‘If she’s anything like you,’ Ruby said, trying to comfort her friend, ‘I’m sure that’s not true.’ Ellie smiled.

Suddenly the lights flickered out. ‘Great, a power cut,’ Ellie moaned. ‘I thought the Technicians had sorted everything out?’

A scream came from downstairs. ‘Maybe this has nothing to do with the Technicians,’ Ruby replied, and the two girls ran downstairs to see what had happened.

‘Ruby!’ Bonnie cried and ran towards her when she got to the bottom of the stairs.

‘What is it?’ she asked, as Darryl arrived from another part of the mall.

‘A man!’ Bonnie sobbed. ‘Outside! He gave me this.’ She handed Ruby an envelope, marked on the front with the Mallrat pentagram.

‘Darryl, make sure there’s nobody still outside,’ she told her friend. He nodded and went to check the entrance.

‘Is that a message, for us?’ Ellie asked. ‘What does it say?’

Ruby opened the envelope and silently read the note, before passing it to Ellie.

Mallrats,

You cannot change what was meant to be. You have only succeeded in postponing the inevitable. The time of pestilence will come and you will all pay the price for your arrogance.

Plague

‘What’s going on?’ Trudy called from the upstairs landing, holding Brady in her arms. At the same time, Darryl returned to the courtyard.

‘There’s nobody there,’ he reported.

‘Don’t worry Trudy,’ Ruby replied. ‘It’s just a power cut. Probably teething problems at the power station. We’d better find some candles in case it’s not back on by sunset. Trudy nodded and went back to her room. Darryl did the same.

‘What did the note say?’ Bonnie asked.

‘It’s nothing honey, just someone playing a practical joke,’ she explained. ‘Could you go check on Gel? Make sure she’s alright without her hairdryer for a few hours.’

‘What was that all about?’ Ellie asked when Bonnie had gone. We could all be in danger!’

‘It’s probably nothing,’ she said, trying to convince herself. ‘But if it is serious we can’t risk Amber knowing about it until we know she can handle it. For now let’s just keep an eye out for anything unusual and make sure the kids don’t go out on their own. Are you with me?’

Ellie nodded tentatively. ‘But we need to be careful,’ she added. She handed the note back to Ruby, who folded it carefully and stuck it behind her belt.

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:thinking:

That’s now confusing… Plague… Why the Mall Rat pentagram…an old Mall Rat telling the others their fight is useless?! :thinking: That weird creepy guy that attacked Ruby and Darryl?

The others should not hide stuff from Amber… And erm… Do I get that right? Lex, Jay, Ebony and Slade gone? And Sal… So… Erm.
. You left no fighter for protection in the Mall?! Did you notice that? Jack is still out cold… Amber and Trudy have to look after their children at first. Bonnie and Lottie are way too young to fight. Ellie looks after Jack. So only Ruby and May can fight… Gel is nowhere a fighter and Darryl neither… Oho
… Well… It wouldn’t surprise me if someone conquers the Mall now :see_no_evil::eyes:

(I imagine just people like Alice or Bray. When they would see that all fighters came to their rescue and left the Mall unprotected with the moms and kids… Uhuuu… Noooot cool guys, not cool!)

(posted too today​:joy::see_no_evil:)

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Don’t read too much into the pentagram, it was just meant as a kind of address rather than a signature. :wink:

I agree, hiding stuff from people never works out in the long run, no matter how good they think their reasons are.

I don’t think they see a big deal with security. They’ve just entered a time of peace after getting rid of the Technos, and the tribes are working together through the Council, so the city is relatively safe (or so they thought). Also the mall is protected by the grille so is pretty defensible most of the time without the need for a fight. That’s not to say that they are completely safe, but I guess we’ll have to wait and see what happens with this ‘Plague’ person… :wink:

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This chapter starts a little bit before the end of the previous one, showing events from Darryl’s point of view, just to avoid any confusion!

Chapter 25: Mixed Messages

Darryl sighed as he lay with his arms behind his head on the roof of the mall, watching the clouds go by. He had mixed feelings about not being able to be a part of the search party. Secretly he was relieved that he didn’t have to go on that boat again - it was cramped and smelly, and he had doubts about its seaworthiness - but he also felt guilty. The fact that he was still here was a constant reminder of what had happened with the trader. And with May. He sighed again, this time remembering the dance he had shared with her after the party, the way she had felt in his arms and the scent of her soap in his nostrils. The slight flush of colour in her cheeks afterwards, and of course the threat to break his kneecaps. He chuckled. Perhaps one good thing that had come of what had happened on the boat was the two of them being left here together. Not exactly alone but at least with Salene gone it would be easier to see her. Those girls spent an annoying amount of time together.

Hearing activity from the street below he got up and looked over the edge of the building. It was the rest of the tribe, coming back from seeing the search party off at the docks. Trudy and Ruby led the kids inside while Gel stayed behind to say goodbye to Creg. Not wishing to watch any further he moved away from the roof’s edge and went back into the building. Shivering slightly as he moved back into the warmth he walked down the stairs to the upper level of the mall and into his room. As he crossed the threshold he felt the unmistakeable crunch of paper underneath his boot. Bending down he picked it up; it was an envelope, slightly crumpled now, with his name written on it. Curious, he stuck his thumb underneath the flap to open it, but at that moment the light in the room flickered and died, along with those in the rest of the mall. A power cut, only this one was followed by a scream from downstairs. Quickly stuffing the note into his pocket he dashed out of his room and down the stairs, reaching the bottom just as a tearful Bonnie ran in from outside and into the arms of Ruby. Ellie had also come down to investigate.

‘A man!’ Bonnie cried. ‘Outside! He gave me this!’ Darryl craned his neck over Ruby’s shoulder and just managed to see an envelope - unconsciously he touched the one in his own pocket - before the saloon owner turned to speak to him.

‘Darryl, make sure there’s nobody still outside,’ she said. Nodding he turned and headed for where Bonnie had run in from. Nervously he stepped out of the mall to the rubbish skips. If the man who had approached Bonnie was still around, he would be hiding out here.

‘I know you’re in there!’ he croaked. ‘Come out!’ There was no answer. He gulped and moved closer, stopping suddenly when a rustling came from a corner. Then something came at him, he waved his hands in front of his face to deflect a blow that never materialised - his attacker was a pigeon. Still slightly spooked he went back inside where Trudy had appeared on the landing with Brady.

‘What’s going on?’ she asked as he reported back to Ruby.

‘There’s nobody there’ he said.

Ruby smiled and turned back to Trudy. ‘Don’t worry Trudy,’ she said. ‘It’s just a power cut. Probably teething problems at the power station. We’d better find some candles in case it’s not back on by sunset,’

Thinking this was good advice he went back to his room to hunt for candles.

Ushering Ruby into a corner by the entrance grille, Ellie dropped her voice to a whisper. ‘Are you sure we’re doing the right thing?’ she asked. ‘Keeping the note to ourselves?’

‘Like I said,’ Ruby replied. ‘It’s probably nothing.’

‘But what if it isn’t?’

Ruby paused a moment before she answered. ‘If this ‘Plague’ is serious then I think we’ll hear from him again. Think about it, why bother warning us? He’s clearly playing some sort of game, and when nobody pays him any attention he’ll either give up or contact us again. We might even be buying ourselves some time by not doing anything.’

Ellie nodded hesitantly. What Ruby was saying seemed to make sense but she still felt uneasy about the whole thing. The idea that an unknown enemy had his eye on them was quite frankly disturbing.

‘Tomorrow we can scout round the city, see if anyone has heard of this ‘Plague,’ Ruby said.

‘Alright,’ Ellie agreed. ‘But if we find anything, if he might be a threat, we have to tell Amber.’

Ruby nodded. ‘And everyone else,’ she said.

‘So what do you think the note means?’ Ellie asked, feeling more relaxed. ‘If it is real.’

Ruby got out the note and unfolded it, frowning in thought as she read it over once more. ‘Clearly he doesn’t like that the virus was stopped, which is quite worrying. He seems to think he can bring it back again.’

‘But that’s not possible,’ Ellie insisted. ‘Is it? I mean, it’s all gone. The Technicians…’ she paused. ‘You don’t think they could have anything to do with this?’ She pointed at the note in Ruby’s hand. ‘Once a Techno…’

‘No,’ Ruby said quickly. ‘I can’t believe that.’

‘Maybe you just don’t want to,’ Ellie suggested gently.

The other girl’s face softened. ‘I know what you’re trying to say,’ she said. ‘I know I don’t know Link very well but there’s no way she could be involved in something like this. I can tell.’

‘Okay,’ Ellie said diplomatically. Perhaps Ruby was right but she was still going to keep an eye on the Technicians. Better to be safe than sorry after all.

A noise outside alerted the pair to somebody entering the mall. Ruby hastily refolded the note from Plague and they retreated into the shadows - from there they saw May through the grille, looking around the corner carefully before dashing inside, adjusting the straps on her bulging backpack as she ran up the stairs.

‘Well that was odd,’ Ellie mused.

‘Indeed,’ Ruby frowned.

Ellie shrugged off May’s strange behaviour and was about to step out into the courtyard again when she was stopped by Ruby’s arm. ‘Wha…?’ she began, but the other girl gestured for her to keep quiet.

‘Look,’ she whispered, pointing out beyond the grille. Ellie narrowed her eyes as she saw Spinner loitering in the entrance corridor, tapping the walls and occasionally making notes on a handheld computer. As she wandered further into the mall Ruby stepped out from the shadows to meet her. Ellie followed.

‘Oh,’ Spinner said, noticing them. ‘Hello. Your power’s gone.’ Ruby gestured to the room around them. ‘Of course,’ Spinner smiled. ‘You already know. I just came to see what caused it. It seems rather strange that only your building was affected.’ Ellie clutched her stomach as the feeling of unease about Plague’s note began to grow again.

‘You got here quickly,’ Ruby stated questioningly.

Spinner smiled again. ‘Quite by chance I happened to be inspecting the power grid for Sector 10 when you went out, so I thought I’d pop along to see what was going on. Do you mind if I have a look around? It shouldn’t take too long.’

‘Can we stop you?’ Ellie muttered under her breath.

Ruby shrugged. ‘Be our guest,’ she said. ‘It would be nice not to have to read by candlelight tonight.’

‘I’ll see what I can do,’ Spinner grinned, turning to walk further into the mall. After a few steps she turned back and innocently asked ‘Is Jay around?’ Ellie fought back a giggle.

‘Jay’s gone away for a while,’ Ruby replied. ‘Down the coast with Lex and Ebony.’

‘What a shame,’ Spinner frowned. ‘Oh well, back to work I suppose.’ She turned to walk away again. ‘Oh, wait!’ she suddenly said. ‘I almost forgot, where can I find Ruby?’

‘I’m Ruby.’

‘Well that makes my job easier,’ said Spinner. ‘This is for you.’ She produced an envelope and waved it in front of the two girls. Ellie and Ruby looked at each other. It couldn’t be, could it? Not so soon after the first one?

‘It’s from Link,’ Spinner said, looking at them strangely. ‘She asked me to give it to you as I was leaving the power station.’

‘Thanks,’ Ruby said, taking the envelope. Spinner walked away - for real this time - to continue her tapping of the building’s walls. Ruby opened the letter and breathed a sigh of relief that Ellie found herself echoing; evidently it was from Link after all.

‘She’s been given the day off tomorrow, so she wants me to come out to the casino with her and Tag tonight.’ Ruby smiled. ‘Fancy coming along?’

‘Are you serious?’ Ellie asked flatly, raising an eyebrow. That was probably the thing she least wanted to do right now, especially after the note from Plague and her suspicions about the Technicians.

‘Sure,’ Ruby replied. ‘Why not? It’ll be fun, and you need a break.’

She was unconvinced by Ruby’s reasons but the more she thought about it the more she realised that if the Technicians really were behind the note then she couldn’t just let her friend go off alone with them, especially when she had already been attacked.

‘Oh alright, you’ve twisted my arm,’ she said eventually.

‘Excellent!’ the other girl chimed. ‘Meet me here after dinner?’ Ellie nodded and watched her friend go back to her room. She stood in thought for a while, trying to suppress the niggling doubts in the back of her head about Link, Spinner and the decision not to tell anyone about the note, before doing the same herself.

It was beginning to get dark and still the power had not returned. Darryl was lying on his bed, keeping himself occupied by playing a battery-powered computer game. Becoming aware of someone else’s presence he looked up to see a figure silhouetted against the door frame. As his eyes adjusted he realised that it was Spinner.

‘Don’t mind me,’ she said. ‘I’m doing a few routine checks, just pretend I’m not here.’

He watched in bemusement as she began knocking on the walls with some sort of instrument. ‘What are you doing?’ he asked her. ‘Checking for rats?’

Spinner chuckled. ‘Something like that,’ she replied. ‘There, all done.’ She closed the computer she had been using to measure whatever it was she was measuring. ‘I won’t take up any more of your time.’

As she left he got up from the bed and went to stand by the last bit of wall she had tested. He put his ear to it but couldn’t hear anything so he tried knocking on it as well. Still nothing, but a shuffling noise from the doorway indicated that, once again, he was not alone. Peeking around the corner were Bonnie and Brady, both giggling at him listening to the wall. ‘Rats,’ he told them sagely, pointing at the offending brickwork. This set them off even more and they ran away laughing and screaming. Darryl sighed heavily and stuck his hands in his pockets. That Bonnie was a strange girl, and it looked like Brady was starting to follow in her footsteps. Feeling paper against his fingers he realised that he still hadn’t read the note he had found in his room earlier. Removing it from his pocket he stepped outside his room where it was lighter so he could read it - and saw Amber coming straight towards him carrying a mountain of paperwork and looking behind her to tell off the girls for almost tripping her up on their way out of his room. It was a disaster waiting to happen.

‘Amb…’ he began, but it was too late. ‘Argh!’ The pair collided, and while he was able to catch and steady his fellow Mallrat her paperwork was not so lucky. It flew up in the air and landed around them like giant snowflakes.

‘Great,’ Amber sighed. ‘A whole day’s work down the drain.’

‘Sorry Amber,’ he said sheepishly.

She shook her head. ‘No, it’s my fault. I wasn’t looking where I was going.’

‘What are those anyway?’ he asked while helping her gather up the rogue papers.

‘Oh, only the whole workings of the city,’ she moaned. ‘Petitions, complaints, the odd bit of fan mail.’ His ears pricked up at that.

‘Really? Who for?’

‘Mainly for Lex,’ she said in a tone that registered her disapproval.

‘Oh,’ he said sadly.

‘And all meticulously sorted by tribe and importance,’ she continued. ‘Or at least it was. Come on, let’s go put these away before anything else happens to them.’ Having collected about half the papers each he followed her to her room where they put them down in a messy pile on her desk. ‘Thanks for that Darryl,’ she said before flopping down on her bed in exhaustion. ‘I can’t believe Jay just left me to do this all on my own!’

‘But…you’re not on your own,’ he said, slightly confused. ‘There’s Ellie and Trudy. And me, I’ll help!’

Amber smiled. ‘Thanks Darryl,’ she said. ‘But if I let everyone else get involved it’ll be like the Mallrats are running the city and the other tribes won’t like that. The leaders chose me as their representative, not the tribe. More’s the pity.’

‘Oh right,’ he said. ‘But they can’t expect you to do everything by yourself. Hey! I’ve got it!’ A plan was beginning to form in his head. ‘Let me be your PA! I can sort through all the letters and stuff, make sure only the really important ones get to you. What do you think?’

‘I don’t know Darryl,’ Amber said, sounding unconvinced. ‘It’s a nice thought, but…’

‘Aww come on,’ he persisted. ‘At least give it a shot. You’ll have less paperwork, plus you’ll get to spend more time with Bray.’ Not to mention how impressed May would be once she saw him in a position of responsibility.

Amber smiled. ‘When you put it like that…alright then, it’s a deal!’ She held out her hand for him to shake. ‘You are now officially a government employee!’

‘Awesome!’ he grinned, taking her hand. May would be all over him once she heard about this!

Ellie hummed to herself as she sat in front of the mirror, brushing her hair by candlelight. Glancing past her reflection to where Jack lay motionless as ever on the bed she felt a pang of guilt at leaving him on his own tonight, not that she was going to be out enjoying herself of course. Not when she had to keep an eye on Ruby and the Technicians.

‘I won’t be out long,’ she promised Jack. ‘I’m sure Ruby won’t want to stay out all night anyway.’

She paused, hoping for some kind of sign, wanting him to tell her that it was alright to go. Or even to get angry and forbid her from going. Anything really. Only the steady rise and fall of his chest told her he was still there, somewhere.

The soft hum of electricity accompanied the return of light to the mall and small cheers arose from other rooms. Instinctively she blew out the candle, conserving the precious wax for the next emergency. It seemed that Spinner had finally figured out what was wrong and fixed it. It had taken her long enough. As if thinking about the woman had somehow summoned her, she arrived in the doorway looking none too happy.

‘I have spent all day in this stinking hole,’ she spat. ‘And I find that someone had turned off the main power switch in the basement.’

‘Didn’t you think to check there first?’ Ellie asked politely. She was in no mood to have a slanging match with the other woman tonight.

Spinner’s eyes flickered downwards momentarily but she didn’t challenge the statement. ‘You should tell the younger ones that it’s dangerous to play with electricity.’

‘They already know that,’ Ellie said, and Spinner opened her mouth to protest. ‘But I’ll have a word with them anyway,’ she finished. The Technician gave a satisfied nod then looked over at Jack.

‘How is he?’ she asked. ‘Still no change?’ Ellie shook her head. ‘I had hoped he would have shown some signs of recovery by now, but I suppose it’s early days yet.’ Her frostiness lifted and she smiled sympathetically at Ellie.

‘I don’t know what else I can do,’ the blonde sighed. ‘I’ve done all your exercises and more but still he just lies there.’ She threw her hands up in exasperation. ‘Sometimes I wonder if I’ll ever get him back.’

‘There is one thing,’ Spinner said hesitantly. ‘You remember I talked about artificially stimulating his brain through the headset? We have enough power to do it now, if you like.’

‘Didn’t you say that could cause even more damage?’ Ellie asked.

‘It’s possible,’ Spinner admitted. ‘A small chance, but not small enough to overlook. It’s up to you.’

Ellie stared for a long time, first at Spinner, then at Jack, then back at Spinner.

‘How long would it take?’ Why am I even considering this!? It could kill him.

‘I can’t spare the time at the moment,’ Spinner replied. ‘In a few days perhaps, but once it starts it’s hard to say how long the process will take. It could be minutes, it could be days, weeks even. Every brain is different.’

‘Jack’s is the best,’ Ellie smiled, going to his bedside and stroking his cheek. ‘Better than Ram’s, even Mega’s.’ After all my fears about their motives, I’m asking one of them - her! - to do this… She turned back to Spinner. ‘I think I’d like to try it.’ I’m sorry Jack but I can’t live without you, I need you!

Spinner nodded. ‘I’ll let you know when I’m ready,’ she said.

As the Technician left, Ellie turned to Jack. She hoped she was doing the right thing, but of course he could give her no sign. She finished getting ready to go out in silence, what she had just agreed to weighing on her mind, then said goodbye to Jack. She paused at the door to wait for a response that never came, as she always did, then with a heavy sigh she ducked out through the curtain to meet Ruby in the courtyard. She was starting to think that perhaps her friend was right - she did need a break.

No, no, no! Jack thought. Please Ellie, don’t! He had heard her talk to him about Spinner and the Technicians - and her suspicions of them - on many occasions, and he didn’t trust them at all. She must be desperate if she was going to let them wire him up to a headset again. The very thought sent shivers down his spine. If only he could convince his body to move! It should be so simple but he felt like crying, the number of times he had tried to lift a finger, to open his eyes, and failed. Now he faced the prospect of having his brain fried by a machine, and he was terrified. Open your eyes! he screamed inside his head. Open your eyes! Open your… Light! He could see it, blinding and wonderful! One second, two, then darkness again. He wanted to laugh and cry at the same time. Progress! That beautiful word, held in high esteem by scientists the world over. He had all but given up but now here was the breakthrough he needed to boost his spirits. Now if only he could show Ellie before she brought in the Technicians. Oh Ellie! Please hold on! Don’t let them do this to me!

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Ahhhhhhhhh… Jack cheershimonYou go boy! Fiiiight! Don’t let those Technic freaks get on you!

Darryl… How sweet he is! Maybe Jay gets jealous later if Amber and him become friendly. Who knows?! A little jealousy never kills…

Poor Amber… Administrative paper works is a kill joy. Bleh. Jay owes her biiiig time for this!

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(oh and new chapter… You might like this one a lot :slight_smile: !)

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Thanks for your comment! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. It’s nice to be able to concentrate on a smaller set of characters for a while.

Great - I should get a chance to read the new chapter this weekend!

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I know where you coming from! I often get so bamboozled whole writing… That’s why I am almost eager to have not left do many chapters for ALL OF ME to write… So I can then start with PHOENIX and part up people more… Lol

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